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Default 09-24-2011, 03:08 AM

Chapter 5:

Kryii's P.O.V.

"Is this your number?"

"Uh..."

I groaned in frustration. I had been practicing this same trick for over 2 hours and I still couldn't get it right.

"Magicians weren't made in a day you know."

"I just....I want to be perfect you know?"

"No one's perfect."

"Can I call my Andreana?"

"Of course."

I sulked my way to my bedroom, shut the door and dialed my best friends number.

"Hello?"

"Adrii. I miss you." Trying to exaggerate the sadness in my voice.

"Aren't you having fun?"

"Well of course, but I mean I can't do anything right, i'm a horrible magician."

"No your not, you just need practice. Criss had been practicing since he was a child."

"I know, I know. But you know how I am."

"Yes I do, but I also know how determined you are, and I know you aren't going to give up that easy."

"It's just so frustrating."

"Hang in their girly, hey Mike is here, i'll call you later okay?"

"Yeah..okay bye."

I shut my phone and stared up at the ceiling. Why can't I have a wonderful boyfriend who would make me think everything's perfect. I closed my eyes and let my mind drift off.


Criss' P.O.V.

I has just gotten off work and figured I would check on how Kryii was doing with J.D. I had told him a few basic tricks to start her out on and wondered how far they progressed.

When I came in I saw J.D. but no Kyrii.

"Where is she?"

"Her room." He sighed.

"What happened?"

"Criss, I don't think she's cut out for this, it's like she's so close but she gives up so easy."

"Trust me brother, for once?"

"I always have."

I patted him on the back and knocked on her bedroom door. I heard a faint noise and figured it meant I could come in. She was laying on her bed off in a day dream so I sat on the edge of the bed pulling her back to reality.

"You okay?"

"Mmhmm."

"No, your not."

"Excuse me?"

"Your not okay, your exhausted, you feel less then perfect, and your wondering why you even signed up for this."

"How di..."

"I know because I wondered the same things when I was little, heck I still do. But the fact is your here for a reason and i'm going to help you with that reason. You just need to have a little patience. Can you do that?"

She nodded her head slowly and I glared at her.

"Yes."

"Good then lets go out for some dinner, get your mind off of things."

She looked at how she was dressed with a messy bun on the top of her head, an oversized sweatshirt and skinny jeans.

"Like this?"

I smiled and nodded.

"Just like that."

I grabbed her hand and helped her off the bed and out into the living room where J.D. was. and nodded at her, knowing what she was going to do.

"I'm sorry J.D. I just, want to be the best for you all and I don't want to let anyone down."

"It's okay, but where are you going now?"

"Dinner."

J.D. flashed me a warning look and I rolled my eyes. It was nothing like that. She was way to young.
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Default 09-27-2011, 11:14 PM

Chapter 6:

Kyrii's P.O.V.

We walked into some awful restaurant. Not awful as in dirty but awful as in extremely elegant and I did not fit in. I looked at Criss with a 'you've got to be kidding me' look but he just squeezed my shoulder and led me along.

We got seated at a booth towards the back of the room. The waiter gave us our menus is what seemed like half a second but I guess that's the kind of service you get when your famous. I took a quick scan over the menu and gawked at the prices. 12.95 for some 'italian' pizza.

"Criss, i'm not eating here."

"Will you relax, it's on me."

"Just because you have money doesn't mean you need to spend it all."

I seethed. He just smirked and rolled his eyes. The waitress came back asking if we are ready.

"Two glasses of wine and the shrimp special please."

I reached over the table and pulled his arm hair.

"OW!" His arm flung back.

"What the heck?"

"That, was, for, ordering, for me."

I said between gasp of laughter. Soon we were both cracking up laughing and we had the whole room staring at us.

Criss' P.O.V.

After eating we headed back to the flamingo club to dance our supper away. Based on the way she was dressed I knew they wouldn't let her in so I grabbed her hand and ushered her in.

The music was blaring and she was just standing there.

"Dance?"

"I'm not going to embarrass you more then I am."

"Kryii.."

"Criss, look at me!"

"I am! and your fine, I wouldn't ever do anything to purposely hurt you."

"Your not hurting me, just yourself."

"I wouldn't do that either."

I could tell this back and forth wasn't going to get anyways so I started making a fool out of myself. I tried doing the worm on the floor, did the moon walk, and then tried doing the tango with her.

After about a half hour she finally loosened up and a slow song came on. I looked at her questionably and she nodded her head yes. I wrapped my arms around her, lightly pressing my hands to her back.

We swayed back and forth staring into each others eyes. She nuzzled her head into my neck and I slowly lifted her chin back up to facing me and leaned in. We were so close to kissing I could see the shimmer of lip gloss.

But she jerked away suddenly and ran. And when I mean she ran, she ran. She was shoving people left and right, and I was struggling to keep up with her. I followed her out to the car and when I put my arm on her a tear slid down her cheek.
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Default 10-03-2011, 11:10 PM

Chapter 7:

Criss' P.O.V.

I slipped into the car next to her and wrapped my arm around her. With my other hand I smoothed away her tears and pulled her into my embrace.

"Shh, it's okay I pleaded."

She turned her back towards me and faced the window I backed off and sighed.

It was a mistake, I shouldn't have tried to kiss her. Obviously by the way she acted that was not what she wanted and I should have known better. The limo driver glanced at me through the mirror and I ushered him on to go.

Once we got back to the hotel she went to her hotel room and I went to mine. J.D. was sitting on the bed and just one look at him told me he knew something was up.

"You okay brother?"

"Yup."

"What's going on."

"She hates me."

"Told you it was a bad idea."

I sat down at the chair across from him and flopped my feet up.

"Dude, I tried to kiss her."

"Christopher!"

"I know, I know. And if I didn't before trust me I do now."

"Well what did she do?"

"She ran away."

"Woahh."

I saw J.D. crack a smile. and I glared at him.

"Whatever i'm going to bed. The last thing I need right now is more drama."

"No, the last thing you need is another relationship."

Kyrii's P.O.V.

I couldn't let him get that close to me again. Who knows what could happen. All I know is that all of the reasons would be bad.

I flipped through my scrapbook my friends made for me and laughed at all the memories. Whenever I was feeling down just looking at the pictures of us made me feel better.

I was scared I really was. But the fact is, I don't want to be scared anymore.
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Default 10-07-2011, 12:38 AM

Chapter 8:

Kyrii's P.O.V.

I called Angelina and read her the newspaper title.

"Too young for Vegas? HAHAHA" she laughed.

"It's not funny, I knew this would happen."

"Girl if you can drink, your old enough to be there."

"Yeah but Criss is in his 40's isn't that a little weird?"

"Only if you find it weird, besides you guys are romantically involved....are you?"

"Ew, gah no. Hello age? Weirdo."

"I'm just saying, then in shouldn't be a problem."

"Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, i'll call you later."

"Kay love ya."

"2"

This was the whole reason I didn't want to come here. What happens in Vegas doesn't stay in Vegas. Besides we all know that this is the rumor mill.

Criss' P.O.V.:

Kyrii came storming into my room flagging a newspaper around. I grabbed it out of her hands and read the title laughing the whole time. She stomped her way to the couch and flopped down.

"Why does everyone think it's sooo funny except for me?"

"Because you have to take it for what it is. Turn it into a compliment. It pays to be young in Vegas, literally."

"Oh shut up."

She playfully punched me and I growled at her. In a way I liked her being young because it brought out the less stressful me, something I haven't been able to do except through magic. She brought out my childhood.

"Let's practice magic."

"Ughh." She groaned.

"If you don't practice you won't learn."

"I know, I know."

Down side to her being young, complainer! ha.

After 15 minutes I successfully taught her a card trick. She was bad, like really bad. But she was determined and that's really all it takes.

"Hey, to celebrate me and the gang are going out, you want to go?"

"I don't know, am I too young?"

"Well...."

"Shut up, i'm going."

And all the awkwardness from yesterday seemed to be gone, hopefully tonight wouldn't end the same.
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i love your stories. you should make one of a time when you met Criss! i think it wud be awsome! and btw i love him too! my dream is to meet him


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Default 10-09-2011, 04:54 PM

Thank's everyone

Chapter 9:

Criss' P.O.V.

I led Kyrii and myself into the restaurant where the rest of the group was waiting.

"Bout time you got here."

I held the seat out for her, and took a seat next to my mom. Kissing her on the cheek.

"Did you guys read the headlines?"

Kyrii shot me a warning glare.

"Yes."

Almost everyone chimed in then laughed. My cell phone rang and I excused myself.

"Hello?"

"Right now?"

"Alright, i'll be right there."

I made my way back to the table eyes glued to the floor. I never got to spend time with my family and tonight would be just the same.

"Guys, I gotta go."

"What's wrong?"

"I guess someone messed up on the schedule and I'm suppose to be on in a half hour."

"Criss."

"I know Costa, and I'm sorry. Just i'll pay okay?"

"And Kyrii?"

"It's up to her."

Kyrii's P.O.V.

I glanced between Criss and his family not sure what I should choose.

"Can I go with Criss?" I asked shyly.

J.D. shot Criss another glare and I quickly decided that was the wrong decision.

"I mean, I can stay, if you want, for real, it doesn't matter." I stammered.

"You can come, lets go."

Criss nodded towards the door and I quickly said goodbye. Obviously my face showed how I felt because the second we stepped out of the door Criss turned to me.

"What's wrong?"

"Nothing, I just am frustrated."

"Can I do something to help?"

"Can you convince them to trust me?"

"They trust you."

"No Criss, they really don't."

"It's just-"

"I'm so young, and your so old, and everyone tries to get in your pants and they think I will too. Yeah whatever."

"Ky..I'm sorry."

"Me too...me too."

Really short but I'll update more tomorrow Woo!
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