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At a mall Dimi was with her father as a tow truck came to pick up her car. "I hope you're not angry with me daddy that you had to leave the party"she stated. "Dimi not to worry at least it wasn't somewhere you couldn't get a signal for your cell phone"her father replied giving her a kiss. Her phone in her purse started to ring. "Hello oh uncle Costa yea dad's with me. What are you serious is she at the hospital yet all right," and hung up "What did your Uncle Costa want?"JD inquired. "It's mom the baby's coming they're waiting for amblunce". "Come on let's go"JD exclaimed. They both got into the car and left. At the bakery Lynn's baby was coming soon. "Where is that amblunce"Lynn stated. "Just relax Lynn everything will be all right". A knock came to the door and Criss came in.

"The amblunce is here". "Get them in here Christopher!"Lynn called out. The EMT came in and loaded up Lynn. As they were leaving JD and Dimi showed up. "Lynn!"JD said when he saw her on the stretcher. "Oh Joseph I thought you were going to miss it"she replied as they hugged. "We have to go now". Dimi gave her mother a kiss and they left in the amblunce. When we got back to the house everyone sat down. "Well that was a lovely evening"my father remarked. "I'm just happy Lynn didn't have the baby at the bakery"I stated. "So what do you think she had a boy or a girl?" Dimitra wondered. "I think a boy"Dennis said. "I'm betting a boy too" Criss replied sipping his water. The phone rang and Criss picked it up. "Hey JD yea really are you kidding all right give Lynn our love and we'll see you tomorrow" and hung up So what it is a girl or a boy?". "Both"Criss replied. "Wait a minute Lynn had twins!!"I stated in shock.

"It seems the little boy was hiding behind his sister JD had to sit down before he ended up on the floor"Criss said. "What are the babies' name?" my aunt asked. "Marisol and Nicholas". "I like that but do you notice something Christopher"Dimitra remarked. "I do they used my middle name and Criss's,"I stated. "I think that's adorable"my aunt stated. "In all the confusion I forgot to tell you guys something". "And that is what Antonia?". "Criss proposed me to me again we're going to renew our vows" I replied. Everyone gave us hus and kisses to congraulate us.
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The next day I went to my store to find my mom there. "I must of missed some party last night" she remarked as I gave her a hug. "You could say that Lynn came very close to having her kids in my office"I replied. "How close?". "The EMT checked her out she was eight and half along". "Wow!!"my mother stated. "You'll love this Criss reposed to me on stage at Believe"I remarked showing her my new ring. "That's awesome sweetie and may I say Criss has good taste in jewelry" she said as I smiled. At Believe Criss was pacing back and forth as my father came in. "Christopher what's going on why are you pacing"he asked as he walked on stage. "I want this renewal ceremony to be good not as good as our wedding but I want it to be remembered"Criss replied.

"Considering you broke your nose and Antonia was six weeks pregnant with Zoey and Verida I can see where you're coming from"my father said. "What do you think?". "Why not have here in Believe make it a surprise for Antonia". My father could see the wheels turning in Criss's mind. "I was thinking of getting the kids involved like Verida and Zoey as flower girls and Nathan as the ring bearer. "But what about Johnny and Stella how are you going to put them in this". "That's going to be a problem but I’ll figure it out”Criss stated. “You always do Christopher”my father remarked. At the bakery I told my mom about the proposal. “He did it infront of his fans I’m surprise they didn’t rush the stage”my mother said. “When he proposed I was speechless however his fans started to chant SAY YES SAY YES” I replied. “Well this time I get to see yo get married again”my mom said with a smile. “Don’t forget about Jill she’s going to have a wedding too”. “I have to know did Criss set them up”she asked. “Believe me mom he didn’t know about it untill I told him the day I found out. My-my jaw was on the floor when she informed me that she was dating Luke”I stated. “Well I should get going I’ll talk to you soon”. She gave me a hug and left.
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When I got home Costa was playing with Nathan. "Mommy"Nathan stated running over. "Hey buddy did you have fun with Uncle Costa". "Uncle Costa took me out to lunch and we went to Circus Circus"he remarked. "Thanks again for watching him Costa I competely forgot he had a half day". "No problem Nathan go upstairs and wash up,"Costa said and he went up. "Those hearing aid you got for him work great you guys ever thought of a cochlar implant". "We're still not sure about it we keep going back and forth on it so for right now we'll keep with the hearing aids"I replied. The door opened and Criss came in with Stella and Johnny. "They did it again Antonia"he said putting them in the bassinet.

"They got kicked out of another day care what's this number three"Costa stated. "Two I swear these two don't want to be in day care why I have no clue"I replied. "Maybe The Luxor day care center can take them"Costa suggested. "I don't know Costa I don't want to look like I can't handle these guys" Criss said. "Criss it's either that or we're bringing them to work with us and I don't think you can handle baby twins while trying to figure out your next demostration or be in a meeting"I remarked. "I'll call them right now and see if they can take them tomorrow"Criss stated and went into his office to call them.
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Before I knew it the day had come for my vow renewal with Criss. At Serenity I was getting ready while at The Luxor Criss was making sure everything was all right. "Christopher you have to get ready"a voice called out. Coming down the aisle was his mother. Criss looked at his watch. "All right mom I have all my stuff laid out". "Well get ready before you're getting married again in what you're wearing" and Criss left. As Criss took the elevator up the song BOOK OF LOVE was playing inside which made Criss smile. When the elevator opened Verida ran into her father with Costa chasing after her. "What's going on here?"he asked. "Your daughter doesn't want to get into her dress unlike her sister who's ready to go"Costa stated catching his breath. "Come on Verida you and I need to get ready". She shook her head. "Verida this isn't the time to be stubborn your mommy wants to see you nice and pretty"Criss said. "No I want to play" she replied. "Come on Verida we'll play afterwards". "Prwomise"she stated. "Yea" and they went into the room. At Serenity I was looking at myself in my new dress. "Antonia you look great"Jill stated . "Mom is probably going to cry her eyes out when she sees me in this"I replied. "Criss is going to start crying himself". "Yea but this time I'm not pregnant and he's not spending our honeymoon with a broking nose"I replied as she snickered. "Do you know what's going on?". "Nope Criss won't tell me but I know he's put the kids in it somehow". "Even Johnny and Stella can't wait to see how he's done it"Julie replied. Back at The Luxor Costa was helping Criss with his tie as George, JD, and Lynn were keeping eyes on the kids. "I got to say Criss Antonia is lucky to have you"Costa said.

"After everything we've gone through with her father, her cancer, me surviving a plane crash I guess her grandfather and our father are watching over us"Criss replied smiling. Nathan stop hitting Zoey, Verida don't run with that juice in your hands, Dad Johnny just spit up all over his jacket and Stella got the runs could be heard from the living room. Criss chuckled. "Just stay here so you don't end up with hand prints or worse dirty diaper marks on you" and Costa went outside as he shut the door. Criss checked himself out in the mirror and saw how god he look. "I wish you were dad you would of loved Antonia"Criss remarked. Who do you think sent her to you Christopher. Criss turned around when he felt a hand on his shoulder but he was the only one in the room.

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At Serenity I was looking at myself in the mirror when a knock came to the door. "Come in"I said and Jill came in with a box. "You look awesome I hope I look that good when I get married". "You will sis what's in the box?"I inquired. "It's from mom she's afraid she's going to start balling and ruin her make-up" and gave me the box. I opened it and it was a necklace with a gold star hanging from it. "Mom told me you love wishing on stars". "So does Criss he told me that when I was sick he wished on so many stars"I remarked. Another knock came to the door and Dimitra came in. "Dimitra I thought you'd be at the church with Christopher"I stated. "I have something for you that I didn't give you when this happened the first time". She opened her bag and in was a veil.

"This is the veil I wore when I married Christopher's father" she said. "Oh Dimitra"I stated. Tears fell down my face as she put it on. "There you look lovely"Dimitra replied as I wiped away the tears. "Thank you Dimitra should we get going before Criss decides to run to Mexico"I joked. "The car's here" my mother called out. After Jill and Dimitra came down I came down and my mom and my father had tears running down their faces. "What do you think?" as I stood at the bottom of the stairs. "You look better than when you got married the first time"my father remarked giving me a hug. My mother was speechless just hugged me. "A woman of few words"my father said as I chuckled. "Come on". The door opened and outside was Criss's Royce Rollis. "From Mr. Angel"the driver remarked giving me a card. I opened the card and it said:

TO MY SWEET ANTONIA,

I KNOW HOW MUCH YOU LOVE DRIVING IN THIS CAR WITH ME SO I THOUGHT YOU SHOULD ARRIVE TO THIS CERMONY IN STYLE. SEE YOU SOON TONY

ANGEL


Oh Christopher as I wiped the tears away. The driver helped me in as the rest of the group took limos. As the driver took off he put in a CD. All of a sudden the song I KNEW I LOVED YOU BEFORE I MET YOU started to play.

There's just no rhyme or reason
Only the sense of completion
And in your eyes
I see the missing pieces
I'm searching for
I think I've found my way home

I know that it might sound more than a little crazy
But I believe


Memories of when I first met Criss and everything we've been through kept flying through my mind as we drove to the church.

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When I got to The Luxor the driver took us to the back of Criss's theater. "Here we go and may I say you are the most gorgeous bride and Mr. Sarantakos is lucky to have you"he stated. My father opened the door as I picked up my train. Inside Criss was nervous and his best man could tell. "You nervous daddy?"Nathan asked. "A little this is a special day for me and your mom"Criss remarked. JD walked over and told him that I was here. "Thanks JD is everything ready?". "Yup we have diapers and extra formula for Johnny and Stella with cribs for when the get tired. Also we have some blankets just incase the rest of the kids gets dozy too"JD stated. "Let's get into position". When my father opened the door I was standing outside of Believe. "You look beautiful as the day you got married the first time"my father stated as tears fell down his face.

I took a handerchief from under my sleeve of my dress and gave it to my dad. He looked at it and smiled. "What's up dad?". "I gave this to your mom when we got married I can't believe she held on to it"he remarked wiping the tears away. "Dad do you still love mom?"I asked. "Sometimes I wonder that if the spark is still there". The door opened and when I saw what Believe looked like I became speechless. My favorite flowers Roses and Sunflowers hanging any where it could be even from the cieling. We walked in and I saw Criss on-stage with Nathan next to him in a tuxedo which made me smile. I saw Costa and Luke holding to Verdia's and Zoey's hands while they stood there in dresses that looked like the bridesmaids' dress, I saw Jill was on-stage too as a bridemaid. My father walked me up to Criss. Criss took my hands as my father took my bouquet. "What do you think?"Criss asked me. "It's beautiful Christopher but I think you're two kids short"I said as Criss chuckled. Criss whistled and George rolled out a wagon that had flowers all over it with the twins in it which made me smile.

"Oh Christopher what am I going to do with you,". Criss took me over to them and tied around their wrists were the rings which made me giggle. "Our ring bearers cute"I remarked. "We had to use them some how since the older kids are in the wedding party"Criss stated as I smiled. George took the rings off their wrist and gave my ring to Nathan and Criss's to Jill. We got back into place as George took the twins back stage. "Now pray to god they don't start crying"I whispered to Criss which made him chuckle.

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Criss and I took eachother hands as the priest started. "We're here to witness the reaffirmation of Christopher And Antonia the bride and groom have decided to write their own vows. Criss bent down and Nathan gave him the paper which made me smile.

"ANTONIA EVERYDAY WHEN I WAKE UP AND I SEE YOU EITHER ASLEEP OR TAKING CARE OF OUR FIVE CHILDREN I THANK MY MOTHER FOR BRINGING ME TO NEW YORK THE DAY WE MET. YOU HAVE GIVING ME THE LOVE THAT I WAS LOOKING FOR AND THAT LOVE HAS GROWN STRONGER EVERY DAY I LOVE YOU AND UNTILL THE LAST STAR IN THE SKY GIVES OUT I'LL NEVER STOP LOVING YOU".
I took my handkerchief and wiped the tears away. Criss looked and saw his mother even wiping tears from her face. Jill gave me mine and I smiled as I unfolded mine.

"CHRISTOPHER I NEVER THOUGHT IN MY WILDEST DREAMS THAT I'D BE A MARRIED WOMAN AND MOTHER WHEN I LOOKED UP IN THAT SKY THE NIGHT BEFORE WE MET I WISH THAT I'D MET THE MAN WHO WOULD CHANGE MY FUTURE INTO WHAT I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE AND YOU'VE BEEN THAT MAN. YOU'VE BEEN BY SIDE THROUGH THE GOOD TIME AND THE BAD TIMES. EVEN WHEN I GOT CANCER YOU STOOD BY ME. MY UNCLE USED TO TELL ME THAT IF I KEPT WISHING ON STARS THAT ONE WOULD GRANT MY WISH AND HE WAS RIGHT. I LOVE YOU CHRISTOPHER NICHOLAS SARANTAKOS EVEN IF YOU WERE A MECHINIC MAKING MINIUM WAGE IN NEW YORK(I heard a bit of giggling in the theater even Criss was laughing). YOU'VE MADE ME THE HAPPIEST WOMEN IN LAS VEGAS AND NEW JERESEY"

"Christopher do you take Antonia again to be your lawful wedded wife to have and to hold to death to you part?". "I do"Criss replied. "Antonia do you take Christopher again to be your lawful wedded husband to have and to hold to death do you part?". "I do with all my heart"I remarked. "I now pronounce you remarried you may kiss the bride"the priest stated. Criss kissed me as the crowd cheered with delight. After the party Criss and I went to a dude ranch Criss did a show at a few years back. As we sat by the fire Criss just held me as we just sat there. "This is so romantic Criss how did you know I always wanted to ride a horse?"I inquired. "A little angel told me"he said with a laugh. Criss and I looked up at the sky and stars were flying through the air. "WOW!!" we both stated as we watch the stars fly by like jets.

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