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Default It wasn't me (COMPLETED) - 05-04-2012, 01:36 AM

It was a rainy night in Las Vegas with lightning shooting from the sky like Zeus himself was sending them. Thunder banging so loud you swear someone was shooting a canoon from the heaven. In a house world famous magician Criss Angel was looking around his place feeling lost. IT WASN'T ME I SWEAR played in his mind. His cell sitting on his table was ringing he looked and saw it was his brother JD. Everyone from JD to news reporters were calling him. "LEAVE ME ALONE,"Criss yelled at the phone than threw it at the wall. "JUST LEAVE ME THE ALONE!!!". Criss fell into his couch as he fell his pants leg came up to reveal a motioner anklet just looked at it made Criss want to take it off.

Outside his next door neighbor's granddaughter was watching Criss's house with a sad feeling in her heart. She hated seeing Criss so down in the dumps considering what had happened and wanted to help Criss but didn't know where to start. She got up from her room and went to look in on her grandmother. She saw her grandmother had left her light now. She went in and turned off the light. Her seventy-five year old grandmother was battling cancer and she was nearing the end of her life. As she checked on her grandmother her mind remembers the day she met the master magician.

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Default 05-04-2012, 02:56 AM

"his pants leg came up to releave a motioner anklet"

I think you mean "reveal".


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It was six months ago that she came to Las Vegas to be with her grandmother who raised after her parents had abondon her. Outside his house Criss was pulling in when he saw a woman bringing in some boxes to her neighbor's house. He walked over to see what was going on. "Can I help you with this?" Criss asked. Not seeing who it is she said sure. Criss took one of the boxes as the woman shut the trunk. "Thanks for the help-". She turned around and saw Criss. "Christopher but people call me Criss"he replied. "My name's Honey" she replied smiling. "Honey that's a name I've never heard"Criss remarked. "What do you expect for having hippies for parents come on in" and Criss followed her. "So how do you know Mrs. Clementine?"Criss inquired. "She's my grandmother I'm moving in to help her since she's dieing of cancer"she replied as Criss put the box down. "I know that feeling I wouldn't wish that on anyone having to see someone they love go through this"Criss remarked. "Well I owe her my parents abondon me when I was a baby so she raised me instead of me going into foster care" Honey stated.

"Honey is that you"a voice called out. "Yes grandmom your neighbor is just helping me with my stuff" she replied. Mrs. Clementine came down the stairs holding on to the banister. Honey went up and help her grandmother down the rest of the stairs. "Oh Christopher how nice to see you thank you for helping my granddaughter with her stuff"she said. "It's no problem and my mother send her regrads she sorry she missed you the last time she came to visit"Criss stated. "Well tell your mother she still owes me seventy-five cents from our last game of gin". Criss and Honey tried not laugh. "When I talk to her I'll tell her". "Why don't you walk Criss out Honey I'm going to watch some TV". "All right" and went out with Criss. "Thanks again Criss"Honey stated. "No problem and if you need something or some help just leave a message in my mail box" Criss said and walked off.

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Default 05-04-2012, 05:30 AM

Nice but you must reveal why the worlds favorite magician/bad boy is in trouble .....
The suspense shall kill us all
Lol j/k
But I'll look for an update soon
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Default 05-04-2012, 01:48 PM

Great story can't wait to read more


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The next day at the Luxor everyone was a buzzed to what happened to Criss. "I can't believe this. The cops just walked into The luxor and went to Criss's production office and brought him out". "But don't forget he kept saying he didn't do it". "But they found the jewelary in his dressing room". "I still think someone framed him". "I think he did it he's got no alibi and the jewelary was found in his dressing room. JD couldn't stand listening to the gossips everyone was saying. He walked into the production office and saw Costa sitting there. "Have you talked to him"he asked. "He doesn't want to talk to anybody"JD replied. "JD do you honestly think Criss stole that jewelary"Costa remarked. "I honestly don't know if Criss did it or someone is framing him" as they sat down. A knock came to the door. JD look through the shade and saw it was Robin. Robin had become the new owner of The Luxor after it was decided that Felix couldn't handle being the owner of the place which pist off Criss the most considering his friendship with Felix.

JD opened the door. "What do you want?". "Look I'm sorry but I need you to clear out the Mindfreak production office"she remarked. Costa got up and walked over. "Look Robin everysince you became owner you've been trying to edge Criss out but untill my brother has been found innconent of the charges we're not clearing out"Costa added. "Listen guys you may work for you brother but this is my hotel and what I say go now clear out!!". "Not untill you have a court order" and JD slammed the door in her face. At Serenity Criss was inside when the doorbell rang. "GO AWAY"he called out. "Christopher it's Honey let me in"she stated. Criss got up and answered the door. He saw Honey standing there while the photographers were on the other side of the street some even standing on cars and vans trying to get picture of Criss. He let Honey in but flipped off the reporters as he closed the door.

"Nice Christopher"she said as they sat down. "I'm just getting sick of this. Everyone thinks I stole that necklace which I didn't" Criss said. "You have to see it from their end you have no alibi and the necklace was found in your dressing room when they searched the place". "I know but I just wish I knew who did this" as tears fell down his face. Honey felt sorry for Criss and gave him a hug. "Don't worry Criss they'll find the person who framed you"she said. "Thanks Honey".

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Default 05-05-2012, 08:36 AM

Poor Criss i hope they find the person who done it soon, Great Chapter Can't wait to read more


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Default 05-06-2012, 02:22 AM

Between you and Loyal OC, I think I started something...I think.


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YOU ALWAYS DO VERITAS


After talking to Criss and seeing all the reporters outside Criss's home Honey felt like she needed to help Criss in any way she could. She walked in and saw it was almost time to go to work. She went upstairs and changed into her uniform as she was leaving the night nurse came over and asked what to do about the reporters that keep snicking up onto their land. "Tell them if they don't get off you'll call the cops and you'll charge them with trepressing. If that doesn't move them tell them you'll shot them"she remarked. "But I don't have one". "Don't tell grandmom this but I have a liscence to carry a gun but I can't bring it to work so I keep it in a lock box under my bed and here's the combination to it" giving her the numbers. "Just keep the safety on"Honey stated.

She gave her grandmom a kiss and left. As she got in to her car the reporters swarmed her car but she ingored them and threaten to run over them if they didn't move which some happily agreed to. When she got to her job she saw JD on the phone. "Just help us Rick my brother isn't paying you for nothing" and hung up as Honey walked up. "Lawyer not helping much with Criss's case". "I'm wondering if this guy has a liscene to pratice law. Have you seen Criss?". "Yea he really wants to know who framed me the night that necklace was taking from the exhibit"Honey stated. "Me too I've talked to the guys upstairs and they say that they can't understand how this happened either". "Don't worry JD they'll find the guys who did this" and went to clock in. Upstairs in the security Honey came in for her shift. As she was filled in on what's going on Robin came up. She walked pasted them and went over to their boss Xavier. "I need to talk to you Xavier" and they went into his office. "I bet you my next three pay checks that they're doing the nasty in there" Marcus stated. Honey felt naucious as that thought poked into her head. "Hey Marcus has anyone found any evidence linking Criss Angel to stealing that necklace?" she inquired. "The one that they found in his dressing room". "Come on Marcus have the cops looked at any of the video of that night?"she asked. Marcus pulled Honey to the side. "I know what you're up to Honey and don't go there". "What try to prove Christopher is innocent so he can be cleared of this" she replied. "Honey you don't know what you're getting into". "Marcus you use to be an officer in a maxium security prison why are you actting like there's a yellow strip going down your back"Honey inquired. "Just forget it Honey leave it alone" and Marcus left.

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Default 05-07-2012, 07:46 AM

Poor Criss i really hope he will have some answers soon can't wait to read more


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