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10-25-2012, 05:58 PM
Chapter 7 :
Criss Was Sitting on His Hammack Outside When He Heard A voice Say," Hi Criss." Criss Recognized the Voice And Said," hey Sandra." Sandra asked," how Did You Know It was Me ?" Criss Said," you Walk so quietly, And i Can Hear " Hammie" Behind You." Sandra laughed And said," he Thought That i Had Something For Him. " Criss said," he Just Likes To Have The Attention Too." Sandra asked," Criss, Are You Ok ?" Criss Said," well , Not Really. I Mean, i Won't Be Able To see The Baby..." Sandra said," but, you'll Be Able To Hear Him Or Her." Criss Said," that's True." Sandra said, " And I'll Be there To Help you with The Baby. " Criss Said," i Won't Be able To help You Though." Sandra said, " It's Ok, my Mom Will help Me, And My Sister." Criss said," this Makes Me Angry. i Wish That, i Was able To See, And look At Your Beautiful Face." Now, He Touched Sandra's Face, and Sandra Touched His. Sandra Said," you'll Always Be Beautiful To Me."
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10-29-2012, 06:58 PM
help!!
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10-30-2012, 04:11 AM
Go into why Criss lost his sight
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10-31-2012, 03:21 PM
ok, i'll try that!
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11-02-2012, 11:57 PM
Chapter 8:
Criss was outside still With " Oso", And He Thought of When he Lost His Sight. it was during a rehearsal for a stunt for " Mindfreak" During The Day. Criss was a bit nervous, But, He Was Sure that, He was Gonna Get it Right. they had parametics There, In Case Something Did Happen. Then, Something Did Happen. One Of The Pyrotechnic Went off, And He was Facing it . It Burned His Face, And It was Hurting His Eyes. Doug was There, And He Called Costa, And He Came Right away. He Knew That, Something Had Happened to Criss.
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11-03-2012, 10:19 PM
That's good so far
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11-05-2012, 04:01 PM
yeah, i'm trying to think of anything else to add...
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11-06-2012, 07:46 PM
i would write, but i'm not Feeling Good
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11-08-2012, 10:44 PM
Chapter 9:
Soon After Costa Came, He Called JD, And He Told Dimitra. Now, Dimitra And JD flew to las vegas, And Costa Picked Them Up. Then, They Went To The Hospital To see Criss. But, The Doctor Said That, They Weren't able To See Criss Yet. So, They waited in The Waiting Room. Sandra was a Wreck, Pacing back And Forth, Worrying About Her boyfriend. But Dimitra Calmed Her Down. JD talked To Lynn, And His Daughter, And they were in Shock Too.
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11-10-2012, 08:39 PM
Chapter 10:
The Doctor Spoke To Criss's Family , And Told Them That, Criss Would Not Be Able To See at all, Because Of The Sparks, And when It Hit his Face. Dimitra almost Fainted But, JD Held On To His Mom, And Told Her That, Criss Would Be Ok. Criss Still Remembers That Day. Now, He Got Off Of The Hammock And Told " oso", " Oso", Come." Now, They Walked Back into The House.
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