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In the car was Marcus. "Marcus!". "Look you've got the wrong idea". "Marcus you've been following me and Honey for all I know your the person who broke into my brother's house and scared his wife into finding out where my warehouse is"Criss stated. Marcus got out of the car. "No way Criss I've been helping you and Honey"he replied. "You're the one who left those DVDs"Honey remarked. "I found those DVD in with some that were getting thrown out but they weren't the ones we use so I took them home and when I saw what was on them I knew that Criss was framed"he replied. "But why did you give them to me instead of Criss or his lawyer?"Honey inquired. "I didn't know who to trust but when you started to wonder if Criss was innocent I knew you could be trusted Honey"Marcus replied.

"Marcus why were you following us?"Criss wondered. "I wanted to make sure you guys were all right if Robin and Xiaver ever found out what I've done Xaiver would fire and Robin would black ball me from ever getting a job at a casino here in Las Vegas"Marcus replied. "Thanks Marcus just keep your eyes open and your ear to the ground and if you find more hold on to it and give it to me or Criss"Honey suggested. "I'll do you one better here's the adress of my lawyer who's handling the case give him everything that you've found or you find"Criss said writing down an address. "Thanks guys". Marcus got into the car and left.
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Default 06-24-2012, 04:51 PM

Great chapter I wonder if criss can trust marcus , can't wait to read more


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That night Criss was on the phone with his lawyer. "Thanks" as Criss hung up he heard an amblunce outside. Criss went outside and saw an amblunce parked next door. He walked closer and saw Honey outside with tears rolling down her face. She looked up and saw Criss just by looking at her eyes Criss knew what had happened. He walked over to Honey as she wiped the tears off her face. "You all right?"he asked. "Yea my grandmother put up a good fight bt the cancer finally beat her"she replied. "I'm so sorry Honey". Criss gave her a hug as memories of what he went through with his father came back. "She was fighter Criss your mom always said that to her when she visited". "My mom can always find the good in anything" Criss remarked. "I should go make the arrangemnt for her" .

"If you need any help just come over". "Thanks Criss" she said as she walked over to the amblunce. In New York Dimitra was heading for bed when the phone rang. "Hello". "Hey mom it's Criss" he said. "Christopher you sound so down what's wrong?" she asked. "Honey's grandmother died this evening". "Oh I'm so sorry to hear that" she remarked. "Yea I thought you'd like to know considering you always went to see her when you were in town" he replied. "Thank you Christopher for telling me so how's the fight going?". "Good did JD and Costa tell you that I have a teasure buried somewhere underneath my warehouse"Criss said with a bit of scarscum. "They also told me Danny may know where they're buried" she replied. "Yea tomorrow we're going to talk to him but I have to ask you mom why didn't you tell me that he lived in the same neighborhood as me?"Criss asked. "I remember how protective you were of me when I started up my friend ship with Danny-".

"Mom I may of been a bit jealous of the friendship you have with him". "A bit-". Criss chuckled. "But I'm all right with it". "He even asked me to marry him". Criss jumped from his seat. "WHAT!!!!". Dimitra started to laugh. "Gotcha Christopher" as Criss laughed himself. "Now I know where I got my sense of humor from good night mom"Criss remarked and hung up.

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Default 07-01-2012, 04:22 PM

great chapter I hope they find the treasure soon can't wait to read more


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Default 07-01-2012, 05:12 PM

Just hope it's not a neutron bomb! *wink wink nudge nudge*


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The next day Criss, JD, and Costa went to see Danny. "Criss where's Honey I thought she was coming with us"Costa inquired. "Her grandmother died last night she's making the arrangement for her funeral today"Criss replied. "I was wondering why mom was at my door at six in the morning"JD stated. "As a favor to me mom's helping her out so she doesn't get overwhelmed by it"Criss remarked as they came to Danny's house. When they got there a car was pulling in. The guys walked in and saw Danny getting out of the back. "Hey Springs!" Criss called out. Danny turned around and saw the guys walking up the drive way. "Christopher, JD, Costa how nice to see you how's your mother," he asked shaking their hands.

"Where's your car or did you walk here from The Luxor". "My mom didn't tell you I live around the corner so to speak"Criss replied. Danny blushed. "Sorry I guess my age is showing". As the driver's door opened Criss and the rest of the guys nearly had heart attacks when Xaiver got out. "Uncle Springs you didn't tell me you knew Criss Angel"he stated as he shut the door. "Yea I'm good friends with their mother Dimitra or Didi as I call her" Danny replied. "So that's the woman who comes over well I'm going to go in the house just don't stay out here too long" and Xaiver went in. "So boys what can I do for you?" Danny asked as the guys picked their jaws off the floor. "Danny how do you know Xaiver?"JD asked. "His father was apart of the gang back in the days. I helped raised him when his father was killed by a rivilary gang after he cheated them out of a quarter of million dollars which was a lot in those days"Danny explained. Criss looked at his watch. "Dam it guys I just remembered I got a meeting with Dave" Criss stated.

JD looked at Criss and knew where he was going. "Oh yea now I remember sorry to cut this short Danny"JD remarked. "No problem maybe I can have you guys over for dinner". "How about this why don't you come over to my house? Chef Ed makes a mean steak that would make a vegan convert"Criss offered. Costa could tell Danny was on the fence. "Come on Danny our mom's in town for a while and you have to see Serenity it's so peaceful there you'll be asking Criss if you can move in"Costa said. "All right boys you've twisted my arm see you tonight" and the guys left as Danny went in. "Now we know how Xavier found out about the jewels" Criss said as they walked down the drive way. "That was a good idea to invite Mr. Springs over for dinner". "I thought it be easier to talk to him about the jewels without Xaiver around come on" and the guys went back to Serenity.

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How about this: why don't you come over to my house? Chef Ed makes a mean steak that would make a vegan convert," Criss offered.

Great line! Very original!


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Default 07-08-2012, 01:09 PM

Great Chapter it nice to see a old character , Can't wait to read more


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Default 07-08-2012, 05:28 PM

He's my old character, remember?


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