[Smurf]

Great Chapter , i'm glad Criss saved Louisa i hope Luke and Geogre get what they deserve ,

[RACHEL02189]

At the hospital Criss and I were being looked over as Detective Taylor walked over. "So how are they?" he asked. "Pretty good considering what they've been through we're going to release them in a few minutes" as the nurse left. "I guess this is good-bye"he said as we shook hands. "Didn't you say that last time" Criss joked. I jabbed Criss in the side. "Very funny Angel maybe you should give up magic for comedy. I'll tell Stella you said hi Louise" and Detective Taylor left. "Well this has been an interesting date" I stated. "Yea it has" Criss remarked. "I guess we'll have to reschedule our date"I said smiling. Criss was about to kiss me when JD walked in. "Don't mind me"JD remarked. Criss pulled back as he got up. "I brought you some dry clothes for the both of you" giving us bags. "Thanks JD" as I went to change in the bathroom. "Has anyone told you JD that your timing stinks"Criss said. "Yea you every time you're about to kiss a woman. I'll be outside waiting" and he went out to the hall.

Criss took off the wet pants and changed into some dry one. While Criss was changing I watched ever so quietly as Criss took off his wet shirt. "You done in there Louise?"Criss called out. "Yea and may I say what a body!!"I replied. Criss turned around and saw me standing there. "How long have you been standing there?" he asked as pulled down his shirt. "Long enough to have some major nice fantasies that would make your mother blush"I replied smiling. "Come on" and we left. When I finally came back to New Hampshire I went to see my friends at the police station. "Look who's back Louisa!!"Louis called out. "Just for a little while"I stated. "Let me guess got to unpack". "No packing up I'm moving to Neveda"I replied. "What Criss asked you to move in with him?"one of the secretaries asked. "Sort of" and held out my hand to show them an emerald ring.

"Holy Criss asked you to marry him!!" as they looked at it. I nodded "Wow are you still going to be in law enforcement". "I don't know maybe well I'll see you guys later" and left. Two months after that Criss and I went to New York so I could do something I went to visit my parents' grave which I hadn't done in a long time. "You ready for this?"Criss asked. "Yea I have to I use to come ever summer on my mom's birthday but I stopped going now I need to start up again" smiling. I got out of the car and walked over to the grave stone. I got down on one knee and put the pink rose on my mom's side and a white one on my dad's side. "I'm sorry I haven't been here but I want you guys to know that I've changed a lot since I last came here I'm an engaged woman. I live in Nevada now working with my husband and his bodyguards which I find fun. I love you guys and I'll be back every year I swear"I remarked.

I got up and walked back to Criss. "Ready" Criss inquired. "Yea" and I got back in. "Oh Criss I have a surprise for you and you have plenty of time to get ready for it" I stated as Criss started up the car. "How long?"Criss inquired as we pulled out. "Oh about nine months"I replied.


THE END..........................

[Smurf]

great chapters , i'm so glad everything work out for them i really enjoy this story

[Veritas]

Subtle, isn't she?