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I couldn't believe it Luke Blade was waiting there but why. I saw JD getting up but I grabbed him. "JD don't even think about it"I stated. "He should pay for what he did to my brothers"he remarked. "JD revenge won't solve anything it just lead to more revenge all right". "You should listen to her JD". Walking in was Mac. "I'll let you guys deal with him I'm going visit Criss" and he left. "Good job defusing that"Mac said. "Believe me I would love to do what JD was thinking of doing to Luke and Fred but what's the point"I replied as we walked in. When Luke saw Mac he looked angry. "It's the person who ruined my last trick". "No I saved Sylvia from you killing her Blade"he replied. "It was going to be the best trick of my night but you had to ruin it!!" he yelled.

I sat Blade back down. "Enough Blade what do you want?"I asked. "I wanted to know why you messed up my best demonstration Criss Angel buried alive I had people watching it from every angle until you had to ruin it"he stated. "Ruined it. Give me a break you buried him in back of his own warehouse with three infections running through his body making him so weak Criss almost died"I remarked. "Cry me a river"he said. "All right Blade stand up you're going to jail for the assault of Costa Sarantakos and the kidnapping of Christopher Sarantakos too" Mac remarked. Luke pushed Mac and me aside and went running. I got up and went after him while Mac followed. Luke pushed people aside even knocking some down. Then he went into a corner but when I caught up he was gone. "Dam it!"I stated. "Where is he?"Mac asked looking around. I saw a blanket on the ground and Luke's jacket underneath. "He did a disappearing act so we wouldn't catch him" I replied throwing the sheet to the ground.

"Stella it's Mac Blade got away". "You'll love this Mac the prints on the box come back to a George Sarantakos"she replied. I heard the name. "That's Criss's cousin he works for Criss". At the hospital JD and Dimitra were sitting in the waiting room as I walked in. "Louise is Blade in custody"JD asked. "No he ran off and did a disappearing act but there's something I need to ask you" as I sat next to them. "What Louisa?"Dimitra inquired. "Did George ever resent Criss or was jealous of his success?". "Why does George have something to do with this"JD asked. "The box that we found Criss in had George's prints on it"I replied. JD got up and looked out the window. "There's got to be a mistake"she stated. "They ran it twice Dimitra there his prints". "It can't be George he's in Mexico with Doug and Ayala they've been down there since I told them about Criss's kidnapping"JD remarked. "That's isn't true JD George came back the day you found Christopher" Dimitra replied. "JD Mac and Stella want to talk to George".
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*MIND YOU I MADE UP THIS DRUG


"All right I'll give him a call". "Also has anyone else visited Criss?"I asked. "No just family why?". All of a sudden we heard code blue in room 2213. "That's Criss's room" and we ran to the room. When we got there they were doing CPR on Criss. "Clear!!" the doctor shouted as he shocked Criss. Dimitra started to cry as JD held her. "Come on Criss don't die"I muttered. "We got a rhythm"a nurse called out. "I want a full blood culture and a tox screen"The doctor remarked and left. "JD take your mom out of here this is getting too much for her" I suggested. "I don't want Christopher to be alone" she remarked. "Dimitra Criss wouldn't want you to be like this considering your heart go back to The Luxor and I'll stay with Criss"I replied. "Thank you" and JD took her. I walked in as the nurse took some blood. "Are you Criss's girlfriend?"she asked. "Just the person who saved his life and got mixed up in this mess". The nurse left as I pulled a chair over. My phone rang and saw it was my friend George. "What's up George?" I asked. "I see you're putting your lock picking skill to good use" he said.

"What are you talking about?"I asked getting up. "My friend just showed me a video of you picking that lock on the coffin they found Criss Angel in"he replied. "Are you serious?"I asked. "Yup nice going you're being called Criss's angel. Talk to you later" and hung up. "I guess I'm not anonymous anymore"I muttered. This was getting stranger by the minute I thought as I went through my mind about what was going on. Why did Fred or Blade decide to show the world who I was or film me saving Criss. "Dad" a voice said. I went over to Criss and took the cloth that Dimitra put on him to try bring down his temperature and soaked it with co,ld water. "You need keep fighting Criss for your mom and everyone else"I told him as I put the cloth back on his forehead. "That was nice". I looked up and saw JD. I smiled. "I talked to the doctor I told him I was Criss's wife".

JD muffled a laughed. "He told me that he found almost a lethal dosage of that drug Lymographic* in his system that's what called the cardiac event"I remarked. "What about his fever?". "Still hi he keeps calling out for his father I guess the fever is making him hallucinate that his father is still around"I replied as JD sat next to him. "Louise" he called out as I started to leave. "Yea JD?". "Thanks for staying with Criss"he said. "No problem"I remarked and left.
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Default 01-12-2012, 12:26 PM

really loving this story i hope Mac and Stella catch up with Luke Blade , i hope they get the rest of the bad guys , can't wait to read more



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That night I couldn't sleep I just sat in a chair in the dark while a thunder storm hit. Then room phone rang. "Hello". "Sorry to wake you". "No problem Dimitra"I stated. "Do you mind coming to my room I just want to talk to someone just to get my mind off of what's going on with Christopher?". "Sure" and hung up. As I walked to Dimitra's room a chill went down my back. Something's up you only get chills when something's not right I thought. When I got to Dimitra's room I saw two shadows moving around. I put my ear to the door. "Remember to put the cloth over her nose and mouth than we'll take her and Criss's mom". "Blade" I muttered. "Well trying to frame Criss's cousin isn't working I told you to make sure where he was when we took Criss". "Post" and went back to my room. When I came back I knocked on the door. "Dimitra it's Louisa" I said. "It's open dear"she called out. I opened the door slowly as Fred was behind the door holding the soaked cloth while Blade had Dimitra tied up and his hand over her mouth. I kicked the door hard and it hit Fred right in the face. Then I took a taser gun out of my pocket and it hit Luke knocking him to the ground.

I went to the back of the door and handcuffed Fred to the bed but when I turned to Blade I saw he disappeared. "Where did he go Dimitra?" I asked as I untied her. "I don't know he was there than he wasn't"she replied. Then Mac and Stella came in guns drawn. "It's all right guys"I stated. "I see we got Post but where's Blade?" Stella inquired. "It looks like he got tasered" Mac replied looking at the wires on the ground. "Yea but it didn't stop him he disappeared again"I remarked. As the days passed Luke Blade couldn't be found and the only thing out of Fred ‘s mouth was I want a lawyer. On the good side Criss's body was fighting the infection but for me my vacation was cut short when my friend Connie got into a major car accident putting her into a coma. I said good-bye to JD and Dimitra and told them to keep me informed about Criss. "We well we just hope Criss will get to meet you"JD replied and I gave Dimitra a hug. When I got back to New Hampshire I went to the hospital and saw my friend hooked up to everything expect the television. I looked at the chart and saw that she was brain dead.

"Oh Connie" I muttered as the doctor came in. "You Louisa Conner?". "Yes I just read that my friend's brain dead". "But something's not right she has marks on her wrist and ankle like she was being held against her will"he stated. "Can you show me where?"I asked. The doctor showed me the marks on her wrists and ankle. She showed me the bruise of a car's grill and bruises of what was a brick wall on her back. "Excuse me" and went out to the halls.
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In Vegas Stella and Mac were getting ready to leave when the phone rang. "Hello Detective Mac Taylor". "Mac it's Louisa Luke Blade is in New York he played chicken with my friend!!"I declared. "I don't understand Louisa what's chicken?"he asked. "It's an episode that Criss filmed in the second season of Mindfreak he was dared by another magician named the amazing Jonathon could hit Criss so they set up a game of chicken. Jonathon hit Criss through a brick wall but Criss survived. My friend Connie has restrain marks on her ankles and arms. She has bruises on her front of a car's grill and bruises of a brick wall on her back". "Can your friend talk?"Mac inquired. "She's brain dead Mac if you want to send someone over to take pictures she wants to donate her organs" I replied. "All right I'll send someone over" and hung up.

"What was that Mac?"Stella asked. "Not what who it's Louisa her friend the one who was in a car accident she was hit and Louisa thinks it's Blade the way she was hit mimicked a Criss Angel demonstration he did. I'm going to send Danny and Hawk to gather evidence before they take her off of life support". At the hospital I stood outside as they photographed Commie. "This is brutal I can't believe Luke Blade did this" Hawk remarked. "Stella told me what's going on in Las Vegas and I got to tell you this what he did to Vienna and Austin was tamed to what he and that Fred Post guy did to Criss Angel" Danny replied. "You guys finished they have to get her into surgery to harvest her organs"I inquired. "Yea they can take her" Danny said. The nurses and the doctor came in and took Connie off life support and took her to surgery. Tears fell down my face as I watched my best friend leave. I walked outside and went back to my hotel room. Back in Vegas Criss's fever finally broke which made his family extremely happy but because of the drugs Luke and Fred gave Criss had gasps in his memory. "I just remember coming in from doing BELIEVE when someone grabbed me so I started to fight them" Criss explained.

"What else do you remember Criss?"Mac asked. "Being thrown down onto my glass coffee table so I dragged myself to a corner. I remember feeling blood running down my arm and down my fingers than I felt someone put their hands over my mouth and a needle stick than everything went black" Criss told him. "Well you're very lucky Criss that Louise knew where you were buried. The doctor said you may of not made it to the morning considering the injuries and the infection you had"Stella stated.

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"Will I meet this Louise? someday" Criss asked. "Maybe when you're stronger Christopher we'll take you to meet her" Dimitra said. "We'll let you rest Criss we have to catch a flight back to New York". "Nice to meet you" Criss stated as JD got up. "Stella is what I heard true that Blade killed another person". "Yea Connie Eastwood she lives in New York near Time Square"Stella replied. "And she was a friend of Louisa Macey so for some reason Luke is keeping her in this game" Mac added. "And Fred Post has he said anything". "Just at his arraignment where he pleaded not guilty" Mac stated. I just wish I knew why he's doing this and involving Louisa into this?"JD said. "Well after we go through the evidience taken we'll probably find out more". "Thanks"JD said and went back in. Since Connie had no family to speak of I had to put together her funeral. As I look at urns since I had her body cremated I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned around and it was George. "George what are you doing here?"I asked. "I heard about Connie so I thought I'd come down and help you". I gave George a hug.

"Thanks I really need someone to talk to you this is bringing back memories of my mom"I stated. George looked at me and wiped the tears from my face. "I remember how upset you were when your mom died she was the reason we became friends"he mentioned. "Yea you had started just started your elective in the ICU where my mom was you were so nice to me and my dad". "I just can't believe that Kelly's gone she was such a nice person". "She kind of didn't like you she said you were creepy"I remarked. "Yea a lot of people do say that about me and I think the midnight blue urn would be nice"he said. "Thanks George". Back in Las Vegas Criss was getting stronger and was getting close to going home. In his room he was playing cards with his niece. "Come on Uncle Criss stop cheating"she said as Criss snickered. "I'm sorry if you're no good at go fish"he joked.

All of a sudden Criss dropped the cards. "Uncle Criss you all right?" she asked. For some reason Criss started to remember a little of what he went through. Will you be careful George said to give him enough to knock him out not to kill him. Give me a break Fred I know what I'm doing. I think you went a bit too far with putting nail through both his hands. "Uncle Criss Uncle Criss!!" Dimitra kept saying until Criss blinked. "Where am I?" he asked a little confused. Dimitra got up and went to get a nurse.
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great story it has two of my favorite things csi ny and criss angel , i'm glad Criss is making a recovery , i hope mac and stella catch up with luke , can't wait to read more


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The doctor looked over Criss since he was still a little confused Dimitra called her father in a panic telling him what was going on. "I'll be right there Dimitra just relax" and hung up. "What's going on?" Lynn inquired as JD went to get his jacket. "Something's going on with Criss he went blank for a few minutes than when he came back he was confused freaking out Dimi I'm going down there and see what's going on" and left. When JD got there Dimi was outside scared to death. "Daddy!" she said running to her father. "It's all right Dimi" he stated holding her. "It was so scary we were playing gold fish and Uncle Criss was cheating as usually than he dropped the cards and had this blank stare and when he came back Uncle Criss was confused like he had a stroke or something" she replied as her father wiped away the tears from her face.

Then the doctor came over. "Mr. Sarantakos”. He sat his daughter down and went over to the doctor. "Is my brother all right?" JD asked. "For right now it seemed he had a brain seizure". "Is he going to be all right?". "He's still a little confused but I looked over your brother's tox scan and one of the drugs that was giving to him sometime causes brain seizures maybe these seizures are bringing back some of Criss's memories of his capture and torture. We'll keep in an eye on it"the doctor replied as Criss laid there. JD walked in. "You gave your niece quite a scare" JD said sitting next to him. "I didn't mean to I was just playing cards when I saw the two guys who did this to me". "Yea Luke Blade and Fred Post"JD said. "But they kept mentioning a guy named George" Criss remarked. "I guess we have another player in this game" JD said. That afternoon after Kelly's funeral I called JD to see how Criss was. "Hello". "JD it's Louisa I thought I'd call and see how Criss is". "He's doing a lot better the doctor may release him soon"he replied. "That's good maybe after they capture Luke I'll come back and challenge Criss to a lock picking contest" I joked.

"Louisa Criss remembered something from his capture does the name George mean anything". "Why?" I asked sitting down. "It seems he was involved in Criss's capture and gave the guys the drugs they put into Criss's system" JD said. It can't be I thought. "Let me get back to you on that JD" and hung up. I went over to my computer and typed in Luke Blade. "Fetal Alcohol Syndrome, killed Vienna Hyatt and Austin Cannon, tried to kill his adoptive mother until he was captured by Mac Taylor. Sentenced to life in a maximum security mental institution. Wanted for the kidnapping and torture of Master Illusionist Criss Angel" I read. Then I saw who his father was. "George Clark". My father was drunk use to hit my mom and me until he was arrested for robbery died in prison. "Oh my god George and Luke Blade are half-brothers!!". I heard a door slam I turned around and saw George.
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I got up as George started walking towards me. "I see you know about my half-brother"he replied. "So you broke Fred and Luke out of that intuition but why?" I asked. "One word revenge. Fred wanted revenge on Criss because he killed his son and Luke well he wanted to join in on the fun"he remarked. "So why involve me?"I asked trying to figure out how to get away from George. "Well Luke found out that Criss knew Vienna and Austin. He wanted proof so I found out through an old friend of Criss's that he sent some pictures to Criss over his computer and since you were going to Vegas I decided to involve you" as he got closer. "So you gave Fred and Luke the drugs to give Criss" as I stepped towards the kitchen.

"Give the woman a prize"he said. "Were you going to kill me". "Fred was going to that night he got arrested until you figured out what was going on"he replied. "It didn't take a genius that Fred was hiding behind the door"I stated. Then George got close enough that he put a knife to my throat. "You ruined Fred's plan on killing Criss your police senses were too sharp that you had to notice that we buried Criss at his own warehouse" he replied. "You're as sick as your brother George"I stated fighting to get lose "Do you have any last words before you die?". "How about put the knife down?"A voice replied. George felt a gun next to his head and dropped the knife. He turned around and behind him was Detective Flack. I caught my breath as George was arrested. "All right George where's Blade?" he asked. George just started to laugh. "You'll never find my brother and Criss Angel will die just you wait" he called out as Flack took him out. I knew Criss was in danger so I called JD but he wasn't picking up. I called Dimitra. "I'm sorry Dimitra can't come to the phone right please leave a message at the sound of the scream". "Blade you won't get away with this we know the truth"I stated.

"Why don't you try to find me before Criss loses his family" and hung up. After that I called Taylor. "Detective Taylor it's Louisa, Blade is in Las Vegas and he has Criss's mother and brother I'm scared what he has up his sleeve for them". "Thanks Louise I'm heading back there right now" he remarked. After I hung up I went to the safe that was in my hotel room. I opened it and took out my police gun. I put it in my bag and left.
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Great chapters , i hope mac get to criss's family in tiime , can't wait to read more


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