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When Stella got to my room I was sitting on my bed holding a napkin in my hands. "You all right?" she asked. "Just shaken up I just don't understand why this guy wanted my necklace"I remarked as Stella put on some gloves. "Maybe it was just a robbery do you have that skin?"she asked. "When I saw it in my teeth I use the napkin and took it out before it came lose and got into my system"I replied giving her the napkin. "Did you get a look at him?". "No but Stella it had to be Blade the only thing I saw were the eyes and it was the same eyes I saw in those videos I'll never forget those eyes"I stated shaking a little. Then my phone beeped again. "Oh god what does he want now" as I picked up the phone. It was another video and it was Criss still in the chair and the nails were still in his hands.

Then Luke came out. "Hi everyone since I didn't get what I wanted Criss here will pay the price". He went over to Criss with a small bottle and a syringe. The camera got closer to the bottle and I saw what it was. "Oh my god I know that stuff it will slow your heart rate to the point where you can be put into cardic arrest," I stated. I saw Blade filled the syringe untill it had a lethal dose. "He's going to kill Criss!!". Before Blade could give Criss the dose Criss broke the chair's right arm and hit Blade with it. "All right Angel!"I called out. Blade got up as he wiped blood from his mouth. Criss had the look of satisifaction on his face. "All right Angel I see we're going to take this to another level". Then another person came from the back of the camera and saw he had something in his hand. I don't know what he did with it but Criss screamed his lungs out than the video stopped.

"Was that-". "An 18 inch screwdriver the same that Criss walked on. He injuried his foot because of that. I think I know where he put it. Oh my god he uses some of Criss's tricks to torture him" I replied. "What do you mean?"Stella asked as I got up. "The electrity was from his first season, The nails was from his ill fated nail gun catch from season four, the screwdriver was from season three" I remarked. "And Luke Blade trying to stop Criss's heart". "I can't remember the season but it was from a show that was called My Secret Cabaret but Criss did that infront of nurses just incase he couldn't bring himself back"I reamrked. "So you know a lot of Criss's illusions and tricks?" Stella stated. "Demostration Criss calls them demostrations yea I know most of them Luke even killed-". I stopped midsentence. "Lousie what?". "My mom she was born on July fourth and every year I'd come back and put a pink rose on her grave but one year something was different". "What was different?" she asked. "I was pregnant"I remarked
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"Why don't you get dressed and I'll get this skin analysed"Stella remarked. After she left memories of that day came back to haunt me. I went to my bag and took out an envelope. It was addressed to me with no forwarding address. I had all ready opened it but I opened it again and it was a bank check for a thousands dollars with a little note that said: I'm sorry for what I did and I hope that you can forgive me for killing your child that afternoon. In the production office JD was on the phone. "I told you that you were going to be in trouble for talking that woman into selling that guy's secrets Costa. No they haven't found Criss yet but he sends this woman videos of him torturing Criss this guy is sadistic and he wants Criss to suffer for some reason. I'll call you later" and hung up. A knock came to the door and JD saw it was me. "Come on in Louise" and I opened the door. "I just wanted to see how you and your mother were"I stated. "Good my mom went back to New York to see how Costa was. Sit down" and I did. "I thought I should tell you I got another video from Luke and I figured out something"I stated. "What's that?" he asked.

"He's using Criss demonstrations against him. The electricity was from season one, the nail gun, season four, and the two he used in the video" as I showed JD. "But why is the question Criss never knew of this Luke Blade guy only Costa knew him through Vienna"JD stated. "I can't figure it out either but someone else is involved helping Luke Blade or this person is using Luke for some reason"I said. After I finished talking to JD I decided to get something to eat but I bumped into detective Taylor. "Louisa just the person I wanted to talk to". "Do you mind talking over some burger and fries if I don't get something into my system soon I'm going to fall over"I replied. "No" and we went to the restaurant
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We sat down and talked "So what do you want to know?"I asked. "Well the skin came to back to Fredrick Post does that name sound fimilar"he asked. "No I'm sorry never heard of the man"I replied taking a drink of water. "I talked to Stella and she informed me why July fourth means something to you it's your mother's birthday but according to a police report filed you were hit full on by a car suffering internal injuries and the still birth of a baby you named Zack"he replied. "Yea I was coming out of the cemetery when this car came right at me. I felt the car hit me and when I woke up I was in the hospital. I asked the nurse what happened and if my child was all right she said nothing and went to get the doctor. The doctor sat down and told me that because of the injuries they had to delivery my son but he took the most of the impact and died" as I wiped a tear away.

"Did you ever find out who hit you?". "The only thing I remember is that he is male had long jet black hair in a pony tail, but officer Taylor I did get something from the person that hit me," and showed him the check. "A thousand dollars and a note: I'm sorry for what I did and I hope that you can forgive me for killing your child that afternoon. No return address" Taylor said. "I was wondering if you could find out who it is I don't want his money I just want to tell him that I forgive him. It was an accident that's all"I requested. "I'll see what I can do. One question did you know the father of Zack". "No I-I- excuse me" and left. I ran out of there fast and went outside. I couldn't even say the word. I thought I buried this but for some reason it's being dug up. I wiped the tears from my face as my phone rang again. "Hello"I remarked. "Lousie are you all right I found out last night that Criss Angel was kidnapped". "Connie you won't believe this but I'm involved in it" I stated.

"But they say that a man by the name of Luke Blade is involved his prints were found in Criss's room and one Fredrick Post wait a minute isn't that the guy who-". "Yea I thought I would never hear that name again"I remarked. "So how did you get involved in it?"she asked. "Luke Blade wanted me to take Criss's computer but when I was ready to tell his brother JD and his mother he sent me a video of him hurting Criss. Connie it was so sadstic it was bordering on torture it made me throw up twice. Connie he even put nail gun into Criss's hands. Connie do you think I should reveal my past to these officers".
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"If it would help bring Criss back I would you maybe the missing link to this whole puzzle"she remarked. "Thanks Connie I'll talk to you later"I stated and hung up. I took a breath and dialed Stella. "Louise where are you?"she asked. "Stella can you get your partner Mac and JD together I think I'm sort of the missing piece of the puzzle"I replied. "Sure"she remarked and hung up. When I came back in I went to the production office and sat down. I sat there until JD, Stella and Mac walked in. "What's going on Louise?" Stella asked. "Mac said you might be the missing piece to this puzzle"JD stated leaning against the desk. "It has to do with me. I realized it when Stella told me the guy I bit wasn't Luke Blade it was a person named Fredrick Post. Officer Taylor I lied to you I knew Fred Post he was Zack's father"I remarked. "So you dated this guy who has my brother!"JD exclaimed. "No Fred Post assaulted me and few other women. I was the only one with proof that Fred attacked me".

"Zack was the proof he got you pregnant"Mac replied. "They took a bit of blood from the placenta and the DNA profile came up that Fred was the father. Fred was put into that same asylum where Luke Blade escaped from"I replied. "But why does my brother have to do with this?"JD asked getting frustrated. "Because your brother was the one who hit Louise making her lose the baby" Mac stated. "What are you talking about?"JD asked standing up. "I dusted the check Louise gave me and got three prints. I ran them and Pyrotechnic license for one Christopher Sarantakos came up"Mac stated. "I guess Fred is using Luke some how to get back at Criss for killing Zack that day in July"I replied wiping the tears away. "Did you say July?"JD inquired. "Yea why JD?" I inquired. JD went to Criss's desk and took out a book. "How much was the check for?"JD asked Mac. "A thousand dollars"Mac replied. "I saw Criss writing out that check" he remarked.

(FlashBack) "Criss why are you writing out a thousand dollar check for?". "It's companion money I owe it to someone I did something wrong long ago in July and I want to send her this maybe it will ease my conscious as well". (Present Time) "I never understood until now why he did that"JD replied. "Well now that we know why we just got to figure out where Luke is keeping Criss and fast" Stella said. After the air was cleared I decided to go for a walk. In the production office JD was on the phone with his mom. "Mom this is getting strange I just found out why Louise is involved". "It was that car accident Christopher had in the cemetery "she said. "Yea I remember Costa telling me that Criss wasn't looking and hit a pregnant woman killing her unborn child" JD stated. "Christopher was so upset at himself even thou his license was suspended for two years he never got over the guilt for killing that child,"his mother remarked.

"Some people take guilt different ways". "Mom Louise was that woman Criss hit" JD said. "Are you serious?". "Yea Criss even sent her a check for a thousand dollars. She thinks that the man who's helping Luke Blade is getting back at Criss for killing his son"JD remarked. Then JD's phone beeped and saw he had a video message. In Sunset Park I was sitting on a bench when my phone beeped. I saw I had a video message. JD told his mother he'd call her back.
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great chapters , i'm really enjoying this story


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"Where do you think they buried him?"Stella asked. "The warehouse I mean Criss's warehouse. I remember when Criss did that thing with Ted Nugent I saw train tracks and the graffiti on the back of the warehouse. When I watched the video I heard the train and when Fred put his head down I saw the same graffiti on the wall" I remarked. "Are you sure Criss had that painted over like six months ago"JD replied. "JD, my cousin's a graffiti artist and if you tag a celebrity’s place like a warehouse or place of business they consider that an honor and they will keep tagging it no matter how many times they paint it over "I remarked. "I'll call the Las Vegas police and see if we can get some people to help"Taylor suggested. Just than we heard thunder. I ran to the door and saw outside was dark as night. I walked out as the wind was blowing my brown hair. "Oh god!!" when I saw the dark clouds rumbling. Stella, Mac, and JD came out as well.

"It's a thunder storm and it's going to be a downpour. We can't wait for those people we have to go to the warehouse before this storm hits!" I remarked. "She's right with what Criss's body has gone through he's probably so weak he won't be able to survive the weight of the wet dirt on the box" Stella added. "We'll take my brother's hummer let's go" and we all got in. As JD drove there I prayed to my parents telling them to hold off on the storm for Criss. When we got to the warehouse I got out first and went to the back. I could still hear the rumble of the thunder as I looked for anything out of place even foot prints. "Find anything"JD called out. Come on Louisa you've found a group of hikers lost in the New Hampshire wilderness in the worst rain storm in New Hampshire history once I thought. I pulled out my phone and took a look at the video one more time as I felt a rain drop. I ran to where the ramp is and saw the soil was patted down. I started to dig until I saw the box. "JD Stella Taylor I found the coffin!!"I yelled as the rain started to pour.

Stella and I started to dig with shovels that JD gave us. When we cleared most of the dirt away we saw there was lock on it. "Christopher are you in there?"JD yelled. We hear nothing. "I can't shoot it open I may hit Criss"Taylor said. I looked at the lock. "JD where's Criss's lock picking stuff?"I asked. "I'll get them" and ran into the warehouse. "Are you sure you can do it"Stella inquired. "Yea in my misspent youth I was known for picking locks"I replied. "Here are his tools" he said. I looked at them and picked the tool I needed. Come on Criss hold on. Then I heard the lock pop. "GOT IT" I yelled. Taylor and JD opened the box and saw it was Criss battered, beaten, and barely breathing. Taylor checked for a pulse. "It's weak but he's got a pulse" as Stella called for an ambulance. I sat down as I looked at everyone surrounding Criss. Now we just need to find Luke and Fred I thought wiping my rain soaked hair from my face.

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really loving this story , i hope they get to criss in time , can't wait to read more


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*I made these drugs up

At the hospital JD waited for some information on Criss and since Taylor and Stella stayed at the site I decided to go with JD. "God I wish they would tell me something anything"JD stated pacing. "I'll see if they'll give me any information"I remarked and went to find a nurse. I went into the ER and found Criss. He looked pretty bad, both of his hands were wrapped up, the bottom of his feet had second degree burns on them. I also saw the wound where they stabbed Criss with the screwdriver. He still wasn't awake. I looked at the chart. Half the stuff I couldn't understand so I took out my phone and called my friend George who is an intern at a hospital in Boston. "This better be good" he mumbled.

I must of woken him up. "Nice way to say hello George"I stated. "Louisa how's your vacation going"he asked sitting up. "Not bad considering what I got involved in but I need your medical knowledge first"I said. "Hit me"he replied. "All right what is lymographic*?" I asked hoping I pronounced it correctly. "It's a drug that causes your blood pressure to drop. It's been banned from the Unitied States since 1970". "Hydosymation*". "It's a anti seizure medication but it's also use for sedation"he remarked. "No" Criss mumbled. "One more and I'll let you get back to whatever you were doing Sentary*". "That's a drug that if used in large dosages can give a person amnesia. Anything else" he replied. "No. Thanks George"I stated and hung up. I put the chart back and went over to Criss. I just stared at Criss as he just layed there. "Criss if you can hear me I'll make Blade and Post pay dearly for what they did to you. You didn't deserve to be treated like this because of a mistake seven years ago"I said.

I took off my necklace and put it on Criss. "This has brought me good luck and I think you need it". I gave Criss a kiss and left. When I got back Stella was back. "What did you find out?"JD asked. "The nail gun wounds and the stab wound from the screw driver are infected so he's on heavy duty antibodics and he has extremely high fever that they're trying to lower"I remarked. "Do you think Criss will remember anything?" Stella inquired. "Maybe bits and peices I looked at his chart Criss was giving a drug called Sentary* if given in large dosage can cause amnesia"I stated. "I need to call my mother" and JD left. "Stella do you think Fred and Blade are done with what they started?". "I don't know Lousie maybe you should get out of Neveda"she suggested. "No I'll leave Neveda when Blade and Post are caught and pay for what they did to Christopher and his family"I replied. My mom always told me guilt is a hard thing to ingore and if you don't deal with it the guilt will eat you alive. That kept running through my mind as I walked.

I knew Luke was a pawn in this mess but how did Fred know that Zach was his. The only way I’d testify if they kept the info from Fred. Besides I wasn't going to keep Zach I was going to give him up for adoption. When I got back to The Luxor they were news crews all around talking about Criss kidnapping. "Lousie over here"a voice called out. I turned and saw JD holding a door opened for me. I slide in. "I didn't want you to deal with the news reporters"he said.
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I'm glad they found Criss , i hope they catch the bad guys , Can't wait to read more


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"Thanks" as we walked. "I saw you gave Criss your necklace"JD stated. "Well it brought me some luck so I thought Criss may need it"I remarked. "My mom's with him I just hope Criss can survive this" he remarked. "I can tell this is taking an emotional toll on your mom. She reminds me so much of my mom she would put up a strong front for me when the cancer was killing her"I stated as I sat down. "How long did she live for?"he asked. "Believe or not she lived two years after the doctors said she was going to die"I remarked wiping the tears away. "You kind of remind me of how Criss reactted when our dad died". "I was close to my mom I put my life on hold so I could be with her when she died. I remember being nexts to her holding her hand as the cancer took her. My father couldn't take it and left the room. When she died I gave her a kiss and told her that she was finally free".

JD sat nexts to me as I looked at a tattoo of a heart with my dad's name and my mom's name in it. "Nice tattoo". "Yea before I left New York for good I got it to remind myself of them how much they meant to me"I replied. "Yea Criss wants to get something like that when dad died but he was afraid that mom would have a heart attack to see a tattoo on him"JD replied as I laughed. Then Melissa walked over. "JD there's someone in your production office wanting to talk to you and Lousie. "Who is it?" he asked. "He gave me this" and it was Criss's necklace. "Criss was wearing this when he was taken"JD replied. I got up and looked in the office and saw it was Luke Blade.
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