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Default 7 Days with 7 Loyals - 08-18-2011, 07:24 PM

Here's a fan fic I started in November of 2009:
Plot: Criss Angel holds a contest in which 7 loyals get to spend a week in Cabo, Mexico with him.
If your following him on twitter, this was inspired by the tweet:Wish I could take ALL of u away with me. Maybe 1 day ill do it cause u know I'm loco..
Enjoy!


PART 1:
She turned on the light in her room after coming back from eating dinner with her parents in the kitchen. There was nothing exciting about that day. Just yesterday she came home for Christmas vacation from college. There were things she would look forward to: No cafeteria food, which she didn’t think was so bad, being able to go to the kitchen whenever she was hungry, and listening to her music as loud as she wanted. But best of all: just being in the comfort of her own room. Mostly she had been thinking about how she would be getting ready to go back to Vegas for the third time.
She went over to her desk and took her laptop and brought with her to her bed, as she sat it on her lap. She turned on her TV and looked at the screen as she started the internet. She looked back at the TV. Apparently her TV was on the channel A&E and there was Criss Angel. She turned the volume up. She looked back at her computer and was ready to check CrissAngel.com. She was logged in, but hadn’t looked at the news section yet, but focused back to the TV. She didn’t see before that it was her favorite episode of Season 5 playing. At that moment Criss was driving in his Lamborghini off to play paint ball. She looked back at her computer. New news!!! It read: WIN A CHANCE TO SPEND A WEEK WITH CRISS IN CABO! . Before she could read the details her phone beeped. A new twitter message from Criss. It said : Hey everyone, if you don’t know already I am heading to Cabo for vacation very soon. Make sure you check CrissAngel.com, I have a surprise for all you! She kept reading. After the headline it read: All loyals who have a week to go somewhere BE PREPARED NOW. Criss has set up a new contest for you all. But only 7 of you can win. If the seven of you win, you will be spending a week with Criss while he is vacationing in Cabo this time. The details of the contest will be up tomorrow. GOOD LUCK TO ALL THAT ENTER! She stopped reading, moved her computer on off her lap, thinking if she won this, she wouldn’t be the one at home watching re runs.
Faster than you could say Mindfreak, she yelled out “Mom”, she walked out of her room briskly, down the hallway and looked in the kitchen and saw that her mom was on the computer downstairs. She saw her dad watching TV, but he was too engrossed in a golf game, baseball, or a movie he happened to find. She walked past him. She walked into the computer room. “Yes sweetie?” “Mom, you will not believe what I just read!” “What?” her mom said still looking at the computer. “On CrissAngel.com there is a new contest.” “Oh well that’s fun, you gonna enter?” her mom was typing an email, not thinking anything of it. “I didn’t get to the good part.” “What?” She looked at her daughter. “If I were to win, I get to spend a week in Cabo with Criss!” By the end of the statement, she had a huge smile on her face and her voice had changed to excitement. Unfortunately she knew what was coming next even though she thought maybe this time it would be different. "Thousands of loyals are going to be entering, do you really think you’re gonna win?” “Ah ha” her daughter said pointing a finger at her mom, feeling confident, “Thousands of loyals can’t enter because only 7 of us can win!” “That doesn’t mean that you’ll necessarily win.” “Ugh” she threw her head back, turned around and started to walk away and raised her voice. “That’s the difference between you and me mom, I believe in miracles!” She walked past her dad and made a loud announcement, “Move over Vegas, Cabo, here I come!!!”

Part 2:
She got back to her room knowing that she couldn’t wait a second to enter the contest. She looked at her TV quickly and saw the end of the paintball demonstration Criss was doing, and knew that in a few minutes her favorite scene would be coming up. The De Kolta chair. She took her computer again on her lap and was racing to figure out what this contest would entail, hoping it wouldn’t be too hard, blowing her chance right out of the water. She read it over again, and saw that she didn’t read that it wouldn’t be up until tomorrow. She sighed. “A couple more hours” She looked back up at the clock above the TV, and then back at the episode. She decided there was nothing she could do but pray she would be one of the lucky ones, and be on the computer before the birds start chirping. She left the internet, and put her computer back on her desk. She left an away message on her AIM saying Enter contest= easy. Winning= exciting. Spending a week in Cabo with Criss Angel? = Priceless!
She sat on her bed watching the episode, and then decided she wanted ice cream, so she went to the kitchen and came back. She smiled again at the end of the scene, when her dad stood at the door and knocked even though her door was open. “hi honey” “ Oh hi dad” as she looked down at her mug. “So mom told me.” Ya, did she also tell you how she also joined the group called Negative people?” At this point she knew again what someone would say. No one in her family could seem to be as positive as her when it came to stuff like this. “She’s just trying to be honest, he stepped into the room, and she knew he would say something now about Criss being on TV. “well I wish I had people around me who would just be excited for me, just as I am, instead of this crap about not winning or whatever. Attitudes likes that makes me not want to share anything anymore.” She said. Her dad didn’t reply, and got distracted by the episode. “Oh, which one is this?” as he looked at the TV. She rolled her eyes, annoyed her dad didn’t seem to hear her. “Mass Levitation. I love this episode.” She said in an annoyed tone. He watched for a few minutes. She watched with him, and hope he didn’t say anything like, oh you know how that one was done right? A few minutes went by. “Well goodnight honey.” Her dad usually went to bed at an early time, even if it was a Friday night. “Goodnight dad.” When he was in his room, she kept watching Criss when she mumbled “no good lucks, wishing you the best, you need to believe.” No wonder she loved Criss so much. She had finished her ice cream, and the episode ended to. She went back into the kitchen and put her mug in the sink. She really started to think about this contest, and the questions started. When she came back to her room she closed the door, and heard a familiar sound coming from her computer. She went over and saw she got an IM from one of her loyal friends from California, Arianna. She sat down at her desk.
Loyal_Ari: Hey, so I see you found about the contest?
She quickly replied.
LoyalClaire4Criss: Ya, what do you think?
Loyal_Ari: It sounds amazing, but it’s going to be hilarious just watching thousands of loyals trying to win.
LoyalClaire4Criss: Ya, I agree. Even my mom said that when I told her. She wasn’t excited for me. =/
Loyal_Ari: Aww. I’m sorry
LoyalClaire4Criss: So what do you think this contest is gonna be?
Loyal_Ari :I don’t know!
LoyalClaire4Criss: I hope it’s something good, and something, not extremely difficult, but something to show who the real loyals are.
Loyal_Ari: Mm hmm.
LoyalClaire4Criss: Think anyone we’ve been talking to will win?
Loyal_Ari: Don’t know. That would be awesome if you, LeAnn and me win. * air punch*
LoyalClaire4Criss: haha that would be awesome! I could just see it: LeAnn cant stop asking Criss about leather pants, I’ll finally get to tell him about how I overcame one of my fears, and ask him to help me with another, and idk, you ask him if he could do a duet with you. Lol!
Loyal_Ari: Lol xD
LoyalClaire4Criss: ugh, this waiting is killin me. You? I wonder what time tomorrow they’ll post it. Haha, I should check at like 7 am. Oh god, me getting up that early Well I’d get up at like 3 for Criss ^_^ I did get up mighty early for the Cement Block
Loyal_Ari: hehe, ya me to, don’t worry. Ugh, well I gtg, mom wants me to help her with dinner. Talk to you later . Night!
LoyalClaire4Criss: Oh ok, ya, goodnight! ttyt!
Arianna signed off, and Claire decided to turn off her computer, since the night was ending, and the praying processing was setting in, and she didn’t want to hear anymore from her mom. She decided to get into her pj’s and since Mass Levitation wasn’t enough Criss for her, she decided to grab season 2, and watch the two episodes where Criss was in Mexico: Straightjacket Keelhaul" and” Shark Cage Escape". She put the DVD’s in while getting dressed, and then sat on her bed with her down blanket over her and pushed play. As she watched, she wondered if she was being to positive, things happen, hundreds of us are going to enter, it’s wasn’t a maybe, she would win or wouldn’t. All of this was making her nervous, and she told herself to stop it. Whatever happens, at least she can say she tried.