Angel in Disguise -
08-23-2011, 01:41 AM
I started this story about three years ago in the old forum and never got to finish it.Its still A work in porgress so I will start with first part and see what you all think.Enjoy!
Angel in disguise
Maria was A 16 year old out cast she was quiet and timid and always kept to herself .She had A hard time making friends because some of the kids would make fun of her because she was A slow learner and every time she would try to talk or make friends they would just make fun of her more and even call her names. Especially this group of four boys Kevin , Mark ,Matt and Jeff. Kevin was always the instigator in fact you might as well say he was the leader of the pack . He was popular captain of the football team and thought he was above everyone and anyone below his standards were dirt to him . He would always pick on
Maria and call her names for no apparent reason. Well he had A reason to him she was weak and just an easy target witch he took advantage of and of course the guys would always follow along with him saying more insults to her and harassing her day in and day out it would never end.
These boys had most of the classes with Maria witch didn't make the day any easier for her because they kept calling her names and would not leave her alone .Every time they saw her walk down the hall they would still call her names and would humiliate her in front of everyone .
Well not everyone Christopher Sarantakos was on the same football team as Kevin.
He didn't understand why Kevin was so cruel to Maria .He choose not hang around Kevin and his little gang because they were just immature and needed to grow up. He hated seeing what Maria went threw everyday with Kevin constantly harassing her. So to make the day alittle better for her he would always say hi to her and give her A smile.
Maria wanted so bad to fight back at Kevin but she was scared to and didn't want any trouble. So she just ignore them but on the inside she felt worthless from there insults and had low self esteem. Maria didn't trust anyone and stop trusting people because every time someone promised her something she was always let down. Maria's father was A good example . He left her when she was A baby he was never a part of her life and chose not to be which was for the better because he was bad news.
Maria was raised by her mom and grandparents she came from A good and loving family and had A great upbringing . No matter what or how bad she felt Maria always stayed positive and always thought positive and stayed strong because she knew one day good things were goanna come for her she didn't know when but one day it was goanna happen.
Maria was sitting in the lunch room at her usual spot by her self .When Chris came up to the table and said hi! How are you?
Good said Maria.
Mind if I sit here?
No said Maria.
Maria didn't think anything of Chris and continued eating her lunch . Well she pretended like she didn't but on the inside she couldn't help but have A bit of A crush on Chris he was always nice to her plus she thought he was the most gorgeous guy to grace this earth .Maria finished her lunch when she got up to put her tray away she got A good look at Chris there was something fascinating about him she didn't know what it was but there was something about him.
Little did Maria know that Chris had A crush on her .Chris always admired the way Maria always stayed posstive and never let those guys get to her she never said A word to them and just kept walking.
Maria went to sit down and dug out her KISS book out of her bag .
You like KISS ? Asked Chris .
Yep said Maria.
That's so cool you know that's one of my favorite bands.
Oh yeah ?
Yeah plus there's other bands I like .
What other bands do you like ?
Ozzy , Motley Crue the list goes on .
Cool I like them to but my three favorites are The Beatles ,KISS , and Queen.
That's so cool I like them to.
Chris and Maria got to talking and had A great conversation and from that day on they became friends .They had so much in common with each other they were the same age there personality s were similar there tastes in music were similar ,they even dressed similar and it was by accident .They were almost like twins.
One day at lunch Maria was sitting at her and Chris's usual spot at the table when Chris asked Maria.
You know the homecoming dance is coming up right?
Well…..I was thinking if you're not doing anything that night would you like to go?
Maria was surprised almost in shock did she hear him right?
What? Are you ok?
Um….can you repeat what you just said.
I asked you would like to go to the dance with me?
Yeah…I mean yes I would love to go.
Great then its looks like we have ourselves A date then.
Maria was still shocked did Chris just asked me out? Yes he did I don't believe it I didn't think he would ever ask me out I didn't think he was interested in me. Well maybe he's not he's just being nice to me as A friend that's all he can have any girl he wants why would he be interested in me were just friends and nothing more.
Last edited by Diamond07; 08-23-2011 at 06:27 PM.