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Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-10-2012, 07:18 PM
Chapter 1:


Criss And Rachel Are Doing Good Now, so Are the kids. Lucas Is 6 now, Isabella Is 4 And Andrew Is 2. They Have a new Addition to the Family, Cassandra Rose. She was Born In March. So Now, She's 5 months old. She's Adorable. Criss Still Works , he's Still in " Believe". And Costa Has his Family Too. Zachary, He's 5, Delia, She's 3, And Connor, He's 1 Now, Almost 2 . Dee Dee is Working , So Is Costa. One Day, Criss was At Home, It was His Day off From " Believe " And He went In The Pool. Then, Lucas said," Dad, i'm Going In too." Criss Said," ok, C'mon In lucas, Just be Careful, ok ? " Lucas Said," Ok Dad. " Now, Lucas Jumped in The Pool, And Swam Around. Now, The Fins Came Back. Criss Saw that, And Smiled. He Thought Of Isabel. Now, He Dove Underwater And Swam With Lucas. Rachel Came Outside And Said," Criss, Where Are You ?" Criss Came Up For Air And Said," sorry Rachel, I Couldn't Hear You." Rachel said," That's Ok . " lucas said," hi Mom, look At Me swim." Rachel Smiled And said," wow, really Good Lucas." Then, Isabella Said," mom, look, Lucas has Fins Again." Rachel said," yeah, they Come Back When He's in The Water." Isabella asked," why does He Have fins, is he Part - Fish Or Something?" Rachel Looked At Criss And She Said To Isabella, " Well, I'll Explain It to You Another Time, ok ?" Isabella Said, " Ok Mom." Now, Andrew Was playing in the house, And Running After " Hammie" . Criss Heard Rachel Say, " Andrew, don't Scare " Hammie", And He Smiled.

RACHEL02189
08-10-2012, 07:30 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-11-2012, 04:37 PM
thanks :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-12-2012, 07:58 PM
Chapter 2:



Criss Said," Rach?" Rachel yelled, " Yeah ?" Criss Said," um, where's Cassandra's Pacifier ?" Rachel Said," Is it in The Room ? " Criss Said," i'm Looking In Here now." Then, he Saw It. now He said," oh, never Mind, i Found It." Rachel Laughed And Said," oh, ok." Lucas said," Mom !" Rachel said," what Lucas ?" Lucas said," tell Isabella To stop Bothering Me." Rachel said, " Isabella, what Are You Doing ?" Isabella Said, " sorry Mommy." Rachel said," you Should Say Sorry to Lucas." Isabella Said," sorry Lucas." Andrew laughed And Said," mama!" Rachel Said,"what Andrew ?" Andrew said," hi" . Criss Said," oh, I Forgot to Tell You Rachel, My Niece Is Coming Next Week." Rachel Said," oh, It'll Be Nice to See Dimitra Again." Criss Said," and Her Friend is Coming Too." Rachel said," Oh, I hope We Have Enough Room ." Criss Said," yeah, We Do." Rachel Said," oh, i Have To Call DeeDee , and Check on Her." Criss Said, Why , Is She Ok ?" Rachel Said," well, She's Pregnant." Criss said," wow, Costa Never Told me This." Rachel Said," well, She Told Me." Criss asked, " When Is She Due ?" Rachel Said," she's Due in April." Criss said," wow. So, It'll Be zachary, Delia, Connor, And The New Baby."

RACHEL02189
08-12-2012, 11:30 PM
oh boy

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-13-2012, 01:59 AM
yeah, it gets better... :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-13-2012, 07:37 PM
Chapter 3:


Meanwhile, At Costa's House, DeeDee was At The House, Taking Care Of The Kids, And Costa was Working. Zachary Said," Mom, can i go in The Pool ?" DeeDee Said," i Don't know Zach, Did You Finish Your Lunch ?" Zachary Said," yes." DeeDee Smiled And Said," ok Then, you can Go In, Just Be Careful." Zachary Said," ok, I will." Now, Delia Said," Mommy, i hungry." DeeDee Said,ok, I'm Making Lunch Now, Don't Worry." The Phone Rang, and She Answered It, " Hello ?" Rachel Said," hi Dee, How are You ?" DeeDee Said," i'm Ok, just busy." Rachel asked," how Are you Feeling ?" Dee Dee said," oh, Just Pregnant." Rachel Laughed And Said," i Remember Those Days." DeeDee said," y'know Rachel, It Wasn't Bad when i was Pregnant with Connor Or Delia. But, With This Baby, It's A Little Harder." Rachel Said," the Same With Me. When i was Pregnant With Isabella, It Wasn't Bad. Then, i was Pregnant With Cassandra, it was a Little Harder." Dee Dee Said," And Andrew too." Rachel said," It was Hard With Andrew."

RACHEL02189
08-13-2012, 09:03 PM
That's a conversion some guys do not want to be apart of

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-15-2012, 05:36 PM
you're right, sorry

RACHEL02189
08-15-2012, 07:39 PM
It's all right just keep going

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-15-2012, 09:36 PM
Chapter 4:


Rachel And DeeDee Hung Up, And She Heard The Phong Ring Again. She Answered it And Said," hello ? " Criss Said," hi Babe, How Are You ?" Rachel Said," i'm Good, i just Put Cassandra Down For A Nap." Criss Said," oh, That's Good. " Then, She Asked," How was The Meeting ?" Criss Said," it was Good, everything went well." Rachel Said," oh good, Everything Is Ready for " Loyal Saturday" , i Guess. " Criss Said," yeah, almost." Rachel Said," oh, JD Called, he said That, Dimitra's Flight Will Be on Sunday At 6:30 ." Criss said," oh, Ok that's Good. " Rachel Said," yeah, she'll Be Here at 10:15, i guess." Criss Said," sounds just About Right." Rachel Said," She'll Be Flying on JetBlue. Flight number 237." Criss Said," Ok, i'll write It Down."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-18-2012, 03:07 PM
i would write, but i'm not feeling good :(

RACHEL02189
08-18-2012, 04:09 PM
Hope you feel better :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-19-2012, 06:57 PM
thank you

:)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-22-2012, 07:34 PM
Chapter 5:


Criss was Busy with work, And He Almost Forgot About His Niece Coming. He Said," Rach ?" Rachel Said," yeah, What Is It ?" Criss Asked, " What Time Is It ?" Rachel Said," It's 9:30, why ? " Criss said," I Gotta Go get Dimitra And The Girls From The Airport." rachel Said," Dimitra's Friends Are Coming Too ?" Criss Said," Yeah, katie, Franchesca, and Her Cousin, Tess." Rachel Said," oh, Yeah, I Remember That." Rachel said," the Kids Will Be Excited To See them." Criss Said," yeah, I know." Rachel Said," Isabella Loves Dimitra." Criss Said," Ok, i Gotta Go, see You when i Get Back." Rachel said," ok, See You Later." Now, Criss Grabbed The Keys From The Table, And Walked out The Door.

RACHEL02189
08-22-2012, 08:56 PM
Question does Dimi know that one of the kids is a mermaid or merman?

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-23-2012, 05:24 PM
well, not yet but she will find out :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-24-2012, 06:36 PM
i would write, but i haven't thought of anything yet :)

RACHEL02189
08-24-2012, 09:01 PM
reread what you got and it will come to you :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-25-2012, 07:38 PM
thanks

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-25-2012, 07:51 PM
Chapter 6:


Criss Arrived at the Airport, And He saw Dimitra And the other Girls. He Said," hey " Dimi", how are you ? " Young Dimitra said," i'm Good, And You ?" Criss said," i'm Fine. How was Your Flight ?" Young Dimitra Said," it was Good, just a Little Bumpy." Criss Said," oh, That's Good." Young Dimitra asked," how's Rachel And The kids ?" Criss said," they're Fine, The kids Might Be asleep when we Get to the House." Katie said," oh, ok." Now, Criss Loaded The Luggage into The Car, And they Drove home. Meanwhile, Rachel Was At the House, and She Was Checking On The Kids, they were Asleep.

RACHEL02189
08-26-2012, 02:48 AM
keep going :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-30-2012, 01:27 PM
Forget it, i'm not in the Mood!!! :(

RACHEL02189
08-30-2012, 06:53 PM
Just relax I know you can do it

Frenchy92776@aol.com
08-31-2012, 06:08 PM
thanks :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-01-2012, 05:36 PM
Chapter 7:


The next Morning, Young Dimitra woke up to lucas saying, " Good Morning Daddy." Criss Smiled and said," good Morning Lucas, How Did You Sleep?" lucas said, " good." Now, young Dimitra was up, and she said," good Morning." Criss Said," 'morning " Dimi", how did you sleep ?" young Dimitra said," very well." Isabella said," hi " Dimi" !" young Dimitra said," hi Isabella, how are you ?" Isabella said," good." Katie said," wow, They're Getting Bigger Criss." Criss Said," yeah, i know." Andrew Said," da da!" Criss Said," what Andrew, Huh ?" Rachel Said," here is Cassandra," Criss Smiled And Said," Hi my Angel, How Did you Sleep ?" Cassandra smiled And Laughed.

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-04-2012, 05:48 PM
Chapter 8:


Young Dimitra asked," uncle Criss, What Are You Doing Today ?" Criss Said," i got a Meeting Today, And That's It." Rachel Said," you should Just Relax Today, Criss." Criss Said," I Know, but i havre to go to this meeting, then, i'll be home." Katie asked," is it ok if Lucas Goes in The Pool ?" Criss Said," Yeah, you Have to Get Changed First, ok Lucas ?" Lucas Said," ok Dad. " Now , He ran Upstairs, And Went in His Room. Rachel Said," you Going in " Dimi" ?" Young Dimitra said," yeah, I'll Just Get Changed." Criss Said," ok, I'm Gonna get Ready To go, See You Later ." Rachel said," Bye Criss." Isabella said," bye Daddy." Criss Smiled And Said," bye " Bella," i Love You." Isabella Said," i Love You More." Criss Smiled, And Walked out The Front Door.

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-04-2012, 07:44 PM
Chapter 9:

DeeDee was Busy With Company, She Had Her Friend, Chloe Over. And the Baby too. DeeDee Said," she Is Adorable Chloe." Chloe Said," Thank You Dee." DeeDee asked, How Old Is She Now ?" Chloe said," She is 3 Months old Now." DeeDee Said," She Looks Like you , I think." Chloe said," She Looks Like Me And Steve Mixed Together." DeeDee said," It's Just Like Me And Costa, Connor Looks Like The both of Us Too, and Delia. " Chloe said," how About Zachary?" DeeDee said," He looks Like Costa." Chloe asked," how are You Feeling So Far ?" DeeDee said," i'm Feeling Good So Far, just Not as Much Morning Sickness." Chloe said," it's not Bad By the 4Th Pregnancy." DeeDee Said," yeah, That's What Rachel told Me." Chloe Asked," How Are Rachel And Criss ?" DeeDee Said, " They're Fine, So Are the kids." Chloe said," and i heard That, They Got a New Puppy." Dee Dee said," yeah, The kids Love Him."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-05-2012, 04:55 PM
Chapter 10:


Meanwhile, Young Dimitra was in The Pool, And She Noticed Something Different About Lucas. She said," katie, look." Now, They Both Saw that, Lucas Had Fins. Katie said," lucas is a fish ?" Young Dimitra said," no, He's a Mer -men ." Katie said," ok, So he's Part - Merman." Young Dimitra said," yeah, that's what i'm Guessing." Katie said," We have To ask Rachel. And she'll Explain It us." Young Dimitra Said," good idea." Now, Rachel was in The House, And She Came out. Katie said," Rachel, i have to ask You, is Lucas part Mer - Man ?" Rachel said," yes, he is , why ?" Young Dimitra said," we saw Lucas in The water, and He Had Fins." Rachel Said," well, that i have to Explain To you... " katie said," Ok..." Rachel asked," " Dimi", Do you Remember Isabel ?" Young Dimitra said," yeah, a little." Rachel Continued," Well, your Uncle Met Isabel in Mexico, And fell in love." Katie said, " And Isabel Had Lucas." Rachel Said," That was After They Split up. " Young Dimitra said," so, if Lucas is a Mer - man, then Isabel was a Mermaid." Rachel said," you're Right."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-06-2012, 05:41 PM
Chapter 11 :

Criss was At The Meeting, And He Suddenly Had The Feeling That he heard Someone Call His Name, it Sounded Like Isabel. He Smiled, And Rubbed The Necklace That Isabel Gave To Him When He First Met Her. Then, Dave Said," Criss, are you ok ?" Criss Said," what ? Oh, Sorry Dave, i was Just DayDreaming, Sorry." Dave Said," it's ok. Anyway, like i was Sayng..." now, Criss Whispered TO himself, " you're Here in My Heart isabel, Always." Meanwhile, At The House, there was Someone Over, it was Costa , DeeDee And The Kids. Rachel Said," so Costa, how are things at Work ?" Costa said," things are Great. Busy, But Great." DeeDee Said," you Look really Good After you Had Cassandra, how did you Lose The " Baby Weight ?" Rachel said," well, i Exercised, And Did Other Things Too." Costa said," Dee did The Same After She Had Connor." katie asked," Rachel, Can Isabella Go In the Pool ? She Wanted Me To Ask You." Rachel said," yes, She Can. just be Careful, OK " Bella " ?" Isabella Said, " Ok Mama." Now, Lucas looked At Rachel, And She Smiled at Him. She Quietly Said," He looks Like you, Isabel."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-07-2012, 05:52 PM
i would write, but i don't feel like it :(

RACHEL02189
09-07-2012, 06:20 PM
Come on you gave me an idea for a story

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-08-2012, 02:55 PM
i did ?

RACHEL02189
09-09-2012, 09:25 PM
Yes now keep going

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-11-2012, 04:00 PM
ok, ok

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-11-2012, 04:09 PM
Chapter 12:


Rachel watched Lucas Swim, And She was Amazed With what He Can Do. Young Dimitra said," wow, He's a Good Swimmer." Rachel Said," yeah, he Learned That From Me, Criss..." Young Dimitra Said," and Isabel." Rachel Smiled And Said," yes, And Isabel." Katie said," you And Criss should Have a Romantic Night Out. " Dimi" , franchesca And I Could Baby Sit The kids." Rachel Said," well, i Don't Know..." Young Dimitra said," i BabySit Back At Home, And I do a Pretty Good Job." Rachel said," i Could Talk To Criss About It, And See what He thinks." Young Dimitra Said," Oh, Ok. " Isabella said," look Mama, i Can Swim. " Rachel said," wow, Very good Isabella." Then, She Smiled.

RACHEL02189
09-11-2012, 11:20 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwww :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-12-2012, 03:29 PM
thanks, and i figured that, Dimi and The Girls Could Give Criss And Rachel A Break, And BabySit The kids, While Criss And Rachel could have a Romantic Night Together.

RACHEL02189
09-12-2012, 05:31 PM
parents do need that

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-13-2012, 06:16 PM
yeah, i agree. i would write today, but i'm not in a good mood . :(

RACHEL02189
09-14-2012, 02:45 AM
All right I'll let you get away today :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-16-2012, 08:22 PM
i'm sorry rachel :(

RACHEL02189
09-16-2012, 08:46 PM
Don't be I'm a patience person :D

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-17-2012, 08:58 PM
Forget It, this is Hard!! :(

RACHEL02189
09-18-2012, 04:22 AM
Don't please

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-18-2012, 02:30 PM
what, what's wrong ?

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-18-2012, 09:42 PM
Chapter 13:


Criss was Home Now, And he saw Rachel And Asked," What do you want to talk to me about ?" Rachel Hesitated And said," well, i was Thinking That , Maybe We Could Have a Romantic Night Together, And Let " Dimi" And The Girls BabySit The Kids, what Do You Think ? " Criss Said," i don't know, I Mean, can The girls Handle 4 Kids ?" Rachel said," i'm Sure That They can. " Dimi" Does BabySit At Home, Right ?" Criss Said," yeah, She Does And she does a good Job." Rachel said," so, they Could Baby Sit The Kids ?" Criss said," yeah, we'd Have to Tell Them What to Do though." Rachel Said," Yeah, i know." Criss said," i Trust My Niece, and She'll Be a Good Babysitter for The kids, they Love Her."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-19-2012, 02:16 PM
Chapter 14:

Now Criss Called The Girls into the family room for a meeting. he said," Dimi", Katie, Franchesca, And Tess, Can You Come in Here Please ?" Young Dimitra said," ok, why uncle criss ?" Criss Said," Well, rachel And i Talked, and we Decided to let you girls BabySit, Lucas, Isabella, Andrew And Cassandra. but, there are some rules..." Young Dimitra said," i knew this would happen." Rachel said, " rule Number one, no Running Around in The House With The kids, one of Them Can Fall , And Hurt Themselves." Criss said," Rule Number 2, there will be no Long - Distance phone Calls Allowed, Unless you are Calling your Parents.." Rachel said," Rule Number 3, Do not use the stove, or anything else that is in the kitchen when Ed is Not there." Criss Said," and there are Numbers To Call In The Kitcxhen, Just In Case there Is A Emergency." Rachel Said," and when you Feed And Change Cassandra, Everything is in The Bedroom, on The Changing Table, ok ?" young Dimitra said," ok, i got it."

RACHEL02189
09-19-2012, 05:03 PM
Why do I have the feeling a rule will be broking

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-21-2012, 04:03 PM
well, you'll see...

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-22-2012, 06:48 PM
i would write, but i'm babysitting my niece :)

RACHEL02189
09-22-2012, 10:45 PM
Maybe she'll give you inspiration

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-24-2012, 05:18 PM
maybe :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
09-28-2012, 04:18 PM
Chapter 15:


It was a Great Night for Criss And Rachel, they Went Out To A nice restaraunt, And They Had a Good Time. Rachel Said, " I hope Everything Is Ok at The House..." Criss Said," everything is Fine Rachel, Stop Worrying, " Dimi" Knows What She's Doing." Rachel Sighed And said," Maybe You're Right, i Should Just Enjoy Myself." Criss Said," I'm Sure That Everything Is Fine." Meanwhile, At The House, Young Dimitra was Feeding Cassandra, Katie was Playing with Isabella, Franchesca was with Andrew, And Tess Was playing with Lucas upstairs. Young Dimitra said," ok Cassandra, you're All Done, Good Girl." Cassandra Smiled And Grabbed " Dimi's" Finger With her Hand. Young Dimitra Smiled And Said," you Have a Good Grip, Yes You Do."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-03-2012, 06:51 PM
Chapter 16:


Young Dimitra had Cassandra in Her Arms , And Headed Towards The Family Room when She Heard a Voice Say, " " Dimi, "come Here!" young Dimitra knew That it was Isabella And Said," What is It Isabella ?" Isabella Said," i Made This for You." Now, She Showed Young Dimitra a Picture Of a Rainbow And two People That She Drew By Herself. Young Dimitra said," Very Good Isabella." Isabella said," it's For You." Young Dimitra said," thank You " Bella". " Isabella Said," Your Welcome." then, The Phone Rang, And Young Dimitra Answered It. She Said," hello ?" Costa Said," hi " Dimi," How Are Things at The House ?" Young Dimitra Said," everything Is Fine, Uncle Costa. Did Uncle Criss Tell You To Call Here ?" Costa Said," no, It was Your Dad, he Was Getting A Little Nervous." Young Dimitra said," he does The Same thing at Home Too."

RACHEL02189
10-04-2012, 03:26 AM
JD probably thought Dimi was having a party while Uncle Criss was out

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-04-2012, 05:06 PM
yeah, right. :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-08-2012, 08:45 PM
Chapter 17:


Meanwhile, Costa was at his House, Feeding " Zorba", And Dee Dee came in. she said," well, The Kids Are in Bed Now, And i'm ready to Turn In. " Costa said," tired, huh ?" Dee Dee looked at her Growing Belly And Said," yeah, This Baby is Making Me Tired." Costa Said," don't worry Hon, once she Comes, It'll Be The best day Ever." Dee Dee said," i know That." Now, She Rubbed Her Belly, And Smiled. At Criss's House, Young Dimitra Said," ok Lucas, time For Bed, c'mon." Lucas Said," ok " Dimi" ." Now, Isabella Asked," katie, can you read me a bedtime story ?" Katie Said," ok, which One ?" Isabella Said," um, i like " Olivia." Katie said," ok, " Olivia" it is." Andrew said," night, Night " Dimi" ." Young Dimitra Smiled And Said," night, Night Andrew." then, Tess Carried Him Upstairs. Young Dimitra went Into Criss's Bedroom, And Checked On Cassandra, She was Asleep.

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-15-2012, 06:43 PM
i would write, but i just can't

RACHEL02189
10-15-2012, 08:01 PM
If your blocked just relax it will come to you :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-22-2012, 05:48 PM
Chaper 18 :


Criss 's Car Just Pulled Into the Driveway, And The Car Stopped. " Dini" Began To Bark, And " Oso" too. Young Dimitra Said," " Dini," " Oso, " ssh, It's Just " Daddy". Criss Unlocked The Door And Came In. he said," Hey " Dimi", how did it go ?" Young Dimitra said," it went fine, Everyone was Pretty Good. " Rachel Asked," is Cassandra Asleep ? " young Dimitra Said," yeah, i just Checked on her 15 Minutes Ago." Criss Looked at the Clock And Said," it's 11:30, you should go to bed now. " Young Dimitra Said," ok, Good Night Uncle Criss." Now, She went Upstairs. Rachel Said, " Well, that was a Great Night, Thank You Criss. " Criss Looked into Rachel's Eyes And Said," your Welcome Rachel." Then, They kissed a long, Passionate Kiss.

RACHEL02189
10-23-2012, 03:50 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-23-2012, 06:32 PM
yeah, i know. :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
10-29-2012, 06:57 PM
i would Write, But I'm Stuck!! : (

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-03-2012, 04:14 PM
Chapter 19:

The Next Morning, Criss Woke Up To Rachel Singing To Cassandra While She was Getting Cassandra Dressed. Criss Smiled, And Said, " Good Morning." Rachel Turned Around And Said," oh, Good Morning Criss." Now, Cassandra Smiled At Her Dad And Criss Said," Good Morning Cassandra, Did You Sleep Good, Huh ?" Now, Rachel Said," Lucas Is up With Dimitra And The Girls." Criss Said," oh, Good. How About Andrew, And Isabella ? " Rachel said," they're Up Too, Ed Made Them Some Pancakes. " Criss Said," they Like When Ed Makes Them Pancakes." Rachel Reminded Criss, " Don't Forget About Costa & DeeDee Coming Over Later.." Criss Said," oh, ok. So, i'll Go To To The Store Later, And Get Some Stuff." Now, Criss was in The Hallway, And He Grabbed The dogs' Leashes. He Said," " Oso, ", " Dini", C'mon, Time To Get walked." Katie Said," " Dimi" And I can Walk Them, it's Ok." Criss Said," Ok, you And " Dimi" Can Walk Them."

RACHEL02189
11-03-2012, 10:20 PM
thumbs up :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-05-2012, 04:00 PM
thanks!

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-06-2012, 07:47 PM
i would write, But I'm Not Feeling Good :(

RACHEL02189
11-06-2012, 08:06 PM
Hope u feel better :)

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-07-2012, 04:34 PM
thanks. did you hear about " Dini?" :(

RACHEL02189
11-08-2012, 04:39 AM
I know so sad :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-08-2012, 10:36 PM
Criss Had " Dini" for a While, i wonder what happened ?

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-10-2012, 08:48 PM
Chapter 20:


Now, Young Dimitra Was Calling The Dogs, only Two Came To Her. She Said," " Dini, ", C'mere, Where Are you ?" Criss asked ," what's Wrong " Dimi?" Young Dimitra Said," i Called " Dini," And He Didn't Come To Me." Criss Said, " Ok, I'll Try It. " Now, Criss Said," " Dini"," c'mere Boy, Wanna Go For a Walk, Huh ?" Rachel said," what's Wrong ?" Criss said," " Dimi" Called . " Dini", And He Didn't Run To Her." Rachel said, " Maybe He's Sleeping, And He Didn't Hear Her." Now, They Heard Lucas Say," Dad, " Something Is Wrong With " Dini". " Criss And Rachel Ran To Where Lucas Was, And Saw " Dini" on The Floor Just Not Moving

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-12-2012, 05:30 PM
i would write, but i can't.... :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-13-2012, 06:38 PM
Chapter 21:


Criss Said," i'm Gonna Go To The Vet, Rachel, You wanna Come With Me ?" Rachel Said," yeah, i Will." Now, Isabella walked up and asked," What's Wrong With " Dini" ?" Rachel Said," well, He's Not Feeling Good, So we're taking Him to the Vet." Isabella said," ok, ok." Andrew Said," " Dini" Sick ?" Criss Said," Yeah, He's Sick." Tommy Said," let's Put Him In His Favorite Blanket, And Carry him to the Car." Rachel Said," i'll Do That." Now, Lucas Started To tear Up, And Ran to The Backyard. Criss saw That And Said," i'll Talk to Him. " Rachel Said," ok, I'll Go with Tommy To the Vet, You stay Here, ok ?" Criss Said," ok." Now, Lucas was in The pool, And He Swam Around. He Had Fins Now. Young Dimitra asked," is Lucas Gonna Be Ok ?" Criss Said," he'll Be Ok, i'll Talk to Him. "

RACHEL02189
11-13-2012, 06:51 PM
I miss Dini :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-14-2012, 07:08 PM
me too :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-19-2012, 10:06 PM
Chapter 22:


Criss saw Lucas swimming, and said," Lucas, come here, i wanna talk to you." Lucas Stopped Swimming And said," why Dad ?" Criss Hesitated, Then He Said," well, It's About " Dini"..." Lucas Said," is he gonna be ok ?" Criss Said," i Don't Know Lucas, We'll have To Find Out When Rachel Calls." Lucas Asked," Dad, Do You Remember When Mom Died , Because I Don't." Criss Said," well, That was Because you were only a Baby." Lucas Said," i was a year old, Right ?" Criss Said," yeah, And I Had to take Care of You." Lucas said," and then Rachel Came, And She Helped You." Criss Said," yeah, And She Loves You Just Like your Mom Loved You." Now, The Phone Rang, And Young Dimitra Answered It. It was Rachel. She Came Outside And Said," Uncle Criss, it's Rachel." Now, Lucas Went Underwater, And stayed There for a While.

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-20-2012, 07:34 PM
Chapter 23:


Criss Said," Hi Rachel, How's Everthing So Far ?" Rachel Said.," Not So Good, " Dini" isn't Really Doing Well." Criss Said," oh Man, This Is not a good Time." Rachel Said," you're right about that. How Are the kids ?" Criss Said," Lucas Is in The Pool, he's not taking It Too Well, Isabella, Andrew And Cassandra Are Playing With The Girls." Rachel Said," poor lucas, He 's Thinking Of His Mom Now, Huh ?" Criss Said," yeah, I talked To Him Before, And i Told Him About the Night Isabel Passed Away." Rachel Said," oh wow, Did He ask About His Mom ? " Criss said," i Told Him Everything." Rachel said," Criss, this is Not a Good Time For Him Now, Just Leave Him Alone For A While, ok ?" Criss Said," ok."

RACHEL02189
11-20-2012, 07:52 PM
poor lucas :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-21-2012, 04:00 PM
yeah, it's hard for him :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
11-27-2012, 06:14 PM
i would write, but i don't have time, Sorry :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-01-2012, 07:54 PM
Chapter 24:


Meanwhile, At Costa's House, It was Busy There, Dee Dee was Taking Care of The Kids, And Costa was Doing Things in The Office. DeeDee asked," when You're Done in The office, Can You Help Me Out Here, the Kids Are Going Crazy." Costa Said," ok Dee, i'm Coming." Now, Costa Saw The text That Criss Sent Him About " Dini " He Said," Criss sent Me a Text About one Of The Dogs..." Dee Dee said," oh, Which one ?" Costa Said," " Dini". " Dee Dee Asked," What Happened To Him ?" Costa Said," apparently, he was in the Family Room, And wasn't Moving on The Floor." Dee Dee Said," oh No..." Costa Said," yeah Tommy And Rachel Took Him to The Vet , And the Doctor Said That, He was Bit By Something Outside." Dee Dee Asked," he Was Outside ?" Costa Said," Yeah." Then, He was Let In. " Dee Dee Asked," no One Noticed " Dini" Limping ?" Costa Said," lucas Did." Dee Dee Said," Poor Kid, How's He taking This ?" Costa Said, " Not So Good."

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-02-2012, 08:21 PM
And So Far, I'm Stuck!!

RACHEL02189
12-03-2012, 12:20 AM
Go back to Lucas

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-03-2012, 10:52 PM
Chapter 25:


Criss Couldn't Tell Lucas About " Dini", So He Just Left Him Alone. Then, He Had To Tell Him. Criss said," Lucas, Can You Come Over HJere For A Minute ?" Lucas Said," Sure Dad, What's Wrong?" Criss Said," Well, i got a Call From Rachel,

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-06-2012, 09:56 PM
i would Write, But i Don't have Time :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-11-2012, 07:23 PM
Chapter 26:


Lucas looked at His Dad And Said," what, What is it ?" Criss Said," Well, " Dini" had Some Pretty Bad Bites On Him, And He wasn't Gonna Survive After He Got Bit..." Lucas Said," So, He's Gone now ?" Criss Sadly Said," yeah, He Is." Lucas asked," What Are you Gonna Tell Isabella, Andrew, And Cassandra ? " Criss Said," Rachel Is Gonna Tell Isabella, But Andrew and Cassandra Are Too Little to Understand."

RACHEL02189
12-11-2012, 07:33 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-16-2012, 06:22 PM
yeah, that was hard For Me to Type, But I had To .

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-29-2012, 06:24 PM
Chapter 27:


Criss was in The Hallway when He Heard The Car pull Up in The Drive way. Then, He saw Rachel And Tommy get Of The Car, And walk towards The Front Door. Rachel Didn't Look Happy. Criss Asked," so, How 's " Dini ?" Rachel Said," he Didn't Make It. " Lucas over Heard The Conversation, And Ran Upstairs. Criss Said," lucas Wait..." Rachel Said," i'll Talk to Him Later." Franchesca Said," i'm Sorry About " Dini" ." Criss Said," Thank You Franchesca." Young Dimitra Said," he was a Good Dog Uncle Criss, you Took good Care Of him." Criss Said," i Know But..." Rachel Said," But What Criss ?" Criss Continued," why Do I feel So Guilty ?" Now, He walked To His Office, And Shut The Door

Frenchy92776@aol.com
12-30-2012, 08:52 PM
Forget It. i Can't Do this Anymore :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-04-2013, 07:32 PM
i'm so Tired of Doing This! :(

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-10-2013, 08:48 PM
help!!!!

RACHEL02189
01-10-2013, 09:57 PM
Answer the question why does Criss feel guilty about Dini's passing and introduce Chicklet to the family like Luke picked her out or something

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-17-2013, 04:42 PM
ok, good idea

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-17-2013, 05:36 PM
Chapter 28 :


Criss Still Felt Bad About " Dini" passing Away, And he Thought About His Dad. Then, Rachel Came In, And Asked," Are you Ok ?" Criss Said," Yeah, i'm Getting There." Rachel Said," i know How You Feel Criss, I Should've Been Outside Too, But it Just Happened Too Fast." Criss Said," i'll Never Forget what What Happened ." Rachel Said," it's ok Criss." Then , He Hugged Her. Now, Luke was In The House, And He had a Surprise Visitor With Him, Another German Shepard. " Oso" was Outside, And Going Crazy. Rachel Said," lucas, Leave " Oso "Outside, Don't Let Him In Yet." Criss Said," luke, i Can't Believe You Did This, you Shouldn't Have." Luke Said," well, I wanted To, Because i Felt Bad For You Guys, Losing " Dini" So Soon." Criss Said," Thank You Luke." Luke said," Your Welcome Criss, Her Name Is " Chicklet".

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-17-2013, 09:42 PM
Chapter 29:


Rachel Asked," so Luke, Where did You Get Her ?" Luke said," Oh, the same place Where Criss Found " Oso." Criss Said," oh Yeah, The Las Vegas Shepard Rescue." Luke Said," Yeah, The People There were So nice, And They Told Me everything About " Chicklet". Criss Said,so Lucas, What Do you Think About " Chicklet ?" Lucas Smiled And Said," i Like Her Dad." Isabella Said," me Too Daddy." Andrew Said," doggy Nice." Criss Said, " We Have To See how " Oso " likes her Too." Rachel Said," We Have To Be Careful With Those Two Now. " Criss Said," they'll Be Fine Together, they Need To get Used to each Other."

RACHEL02189
01-17-2013, 10:20 PM
awwwwwwwwwww

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-21-2013, 08:58 PM
yeah nice, huh ?

RACHEL02189
01-22-2013, 05:34 AM
thumbs up

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-23-2013, 08:35 PM
thanks!!

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-23-2013, 08:37 PM
How Should i End It Now ?

Frenchy92776@aol.com
01-24-2013, 06:28 PM
that's it, i'm Done :)