A Proposal To Remember

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Chapter 1:

Criss Was in His Room, And He had His Bags Packed. Then, he Looked at the Engagement Ring That he Was Gonna give to Sandra. He Smiled And said," here Goes Nothing." Now, He Put It In the Carry- on Bag And Took Out Of The room. Tommy Said," are You Ready Criss ?" Criss Said," Yeah, Let's Go." Now, He Saw Sandra And Said," you Ready ?" Sandra Said," yeah, let's Go." Criss Said," yeah, Ok." Now, he said," Hammie, Be Good, ok Buddy?" Hammie Meowed, And Criss Smiled. Criss was gonna Have A Great time, and Do Something that, He Was Ready To Do, ask Sandra To marry Him.

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More more more!!!!!!

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ok, i was hoping you would say that rachel. by the way, how are you ?

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Chapter 2:


Criss And Sandra were on The Plane Now, on their Way To Mexico. they were both Excited, And Criss Was more Excited Than She was. he thought Of A good Way To Propose To Sandra. he kept it a secret. they were talking about Everything on The plane. A Few Hours Later, they Were in Mexico, And On Their wayTo The Hotel. Criss Loved being in Mexico, And Relax. But, He Was going To Propose to Sandra, and hoped That , She'd Say " yes". Sandra said," Criss, this Is Great." Now she said, " oh My God , Look At This View Criss." Now, He Walked to where Sandra was on The Balcony, and Said," This Is Beautiful." Sandra Said," i'm Going To Cry." he looked her, and wiped her eyes.

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Chapter 3 :
That Night, Criss and Sandra Had A Quiet Night alone. But, Criss Had Something Planned, And Sandra Didn't Know. She Thought That, they would Have A Romantic Dinner at a restraunt. but, criss planned something better. Sandra said, " Criss, Are you sure wqe're not going Out for Dinner ? " Criss Said," Yeah, i'm Sure, Why ? "

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sorry for that short Chapter. :(

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Chapter 4 :


Now, Criss And Sandra were on the beach, and they were holding hands. then, Sandra Saw the table Set Up,and she Said," criss, Did you Arrange This ?" Criss Smiled And Said, " Yeah, do You Like It ?" Sandra Said, " I Love it." Now, They Walked To the table and sat down. they ate Dinner And Talked. Then, Criss Started to say," Sandra, you Mean The World to Me And i would Like to Ask you to be My Wife, Will You Marry Me ?" Sandra Said," yes."

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I'm well and I loved the way Criss proposed the men is romatic pure and simple :o

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yeah, that was Great how he proposed

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Chapter 5:


Fireworks went off, and Criss Said," you make me so happy." Sandra said," so do you." Now, They kissed, And Sandra's Family Came out of Hiding. Sandra Said," i can't Believe You did This." Criss said," i wanted To Surprise you." Sandra said," well, You Did Good." Criss said, " thank you." Sandra said, your welcome." Criss did ask her dad for Sandra's Hand in Marriage, And He said Yes. Now, Criss Called His Mom And Brothers. He Told Them about The Engagement. They were Very happy. Later That Night, Criss and Sandra were Alone, And they just Talked. Sandra Asked," Criss , Have You ever Thought About Having a Baby ?" Criss Said," well, i Have, And i don't Know if we're Ready To have Kids Yet." Sandra said," well, i think That, i'm ready." Criss said," Are you Sure ?" Sandra Said," yes, i am." So Criss And Sandra Started To Kiss And it Got Serious. they Closed The Curtains And Locked The Door. and it went on from there...

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hmmmmmmm do I see parenthood before marriage

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well, maybe..

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Chapter 6 :


The Next Morning, Criss Woke up and Watched Sandra Sleep. Then, She Woke Up And Said," hey" Criss Said," Hey." Sandra Said," i Think We Made a Baby." Criss Said," i Think so Too." Then they Kissed Again. Criss Said," What Do You Want To do Today ? " Sandra said, " Well, we Can Just Hang out here if You Want." Criss Said," Or, We Can Just go on The Beach." Sandra Said," or We can go Horse BacK Riding. Criss Said," or, We Can Do Something Better."


Sandra Said," like What ?" Criss Said," we can Go to see Different Families, And Buy Them Food And What They Need." Sandra Said, " What a good Idea Criss."

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Chapter 7: Criss was Entertaing The Kids, And Sandrta Looked On And Smiled. Now, she Rubbed Her Stomach, And Said," pretty Soon little One." But, they Don't Know if They're Expecting a Baby Yet. They Have to Wait And See. Criss was Giving Different Families things That They Needed. Sandra said," c'mon Criss, i'm Starving." Criss Said,ok, I'm Coming." Now, Criss Said, Goodbye to The Families, And walked hand and Hand With Sandra. She Said ," Criss, i want To gack To The Hotel And eat." Criss Said," um, ok whatever You want to Do." Now, They Headed Back To The Hotel.

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Chapter 8:

Criss And Sandra were eating. then, Sandra Got Up And Ran To The Bathroom. Criss Said," Sandra , Honey, what's Wrong ?" She Didn't Answer." Criss Felt Bad, But he Stayed by The Door. a Few Minutes later, She Came Out, And had Something in Her Hand. Criss Saw it And Asked," What Is That ?" Sandra Said," just Look At it And you'll Know." Now, He looked At It closely And Said," Sandra, You're ... ?" Said," yes i Am." Criss said, " Wow, When Did it Happen ?" Sandra Said," It Happened During Your Break From Believe in June Last Year, Remember?" Criss Said," oh Yeah, i Remember." Sandra Said," we Have To Keep This A secret From Everyone And Make Sure That The Baby Is ok, once we know we are having this Baby. Criss Said," Don't Worry, Everything will Be Fine. And This Baby Is a WonderFul Surprise."

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You're good girl :)

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thanks, i'm just getting it back. i'm a little Rusty.

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Chapter 9 :


Sandra was Thinking About The Baby. And How it will Change Her Life. but then, she thought of how criss will be a good Dad to the baby. she has seen how he is with His Niece. they will be Good Parents To The baby. Criss Said," what Are You Thinking About ?'" Sandra Said," the baby." Criss Said," This Baby will Be Very Lucky To Have Parents Like us." Sandra said," You're Right, so, I shouldn't Worry About Anything." Criss Said," no, just Relax, Everything Will Be Fine." Sandra said, " ok, i just don't Know if i can Handle The Morning Sickness And The Back Pain..." Criss Said," Sandra, Baby, i'll Help You Through That Stuff, And Anything Else." Sandra Looked At Criss and Said," you Are So Good To Me." Criss said," i Know. that's why i love you." Sandra Smiled, And Kissed Criss.

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Chapter10 :

That Night, Sandra And Criss Stayed in, And Didn't Go Out. When Criss was in Cabo, he'd go Out with a few Friends. But, He Decided To Stay in. He Realized That, he's Not that Kind Of Person Anymore. He Knows That, he's Gonna Be a Married Man With a Baby on The Way.

Sandra asked," do You Remember 3 Years Ago When We Were Here ?" Criss Said," yeah, in July, then in October With My Family." Sandra Said, " That Was Great." Criss Smiled And Said," yeah, That Was." Sandra Said," But Soon, We'll Be Back Here with Our Son Or Daughter." Criss said," yeah, that'll Be Great." Sandra asked," do You Think My Mom Knows About The Baby ?" Criss Said," i don't think so, Why ?" Sandra Said, " Well, She Keeps looking At Me And Crying." Criss said," She's Happy About The Engagement, That's Why." Sandra Said," and My Dad is Happy Too. " Criss Said," yeah, he's Losing A Daughter, But Gaining a Son - in Law." Then, He Smiled, Thinking Of His Dad.

[RACHEL02189]

Maybe Dimitra has baby rader :D

[Veritas]

Rather brief, wouldn't you say?

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well, what do u mean ?

[Veritas]

I mean you didn't go into too much detail.

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like what ?
by the way, how are you Doing ?

[Veritas]

I'm doing all right, thank you. What I mean by "going into too much detail" is that you are not creating a "word picture" in your readers' minds. You need to describe the time, place, setting, and the characters more so that your readers will be drawn into the story. For example, when you left off the little "bedroom scene" with "...and it went on from there..." you left your readers hanging. What went on from there? Don't be afraid to go into more detail in your stories. It will make them richer. When I wrote "Baptism of Fire", I did a lot of painstaking research about Tarot cards, the Wiccan movement, as well as about earthquakes in the Southwestern US before I typed a single line. It's the details that holds a reader's interest, not just the narrative.

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oh, ok i get what your saying.

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Chapter 11:



Sandra Remembers The Night That They " Did It" . They were alone, And Criss turned On music. Criss Said," are You Sure You Want To do This ? " Sandra Said," yeah, i'm Sure. " Criss said," ok. " now, They Kissed, And Took Off Their Clothes . Sandra looked At Criss's Body, And liked What She Saw, Criss Did The Same. Criss Touched Sandra where She Liked To Be touched, And She Moaned. Criss Looked into her Eyes, And said," i'm Not Going To Hurt You, i Promise." Sandra Smiled, And She Said," I know." Now, Criss was on Top Of sandra, Rocking Back And Forth. Sandra Moaned, so Did Criss. They tried different Positions. one Position Worked For Them. Criss looked at Sandra And Said," how was That ?" Sandra Said," That was Great." Then, They Kissed.

[RACHEL02189]

Anybody got a towel my glasses are fogged up after reading that!!!! :o

[Veritas]

Well, you did add more detail, that's for sure. ;)

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so, was that Good or not ?

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more please!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Veritas]

It's an improvement. You certainly impressed Rachel, that's for sure!

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yeah, i knew she would like it :)

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Chapter 12:


Criss was Back In Las Vegas Now, And He had Company, Sandra. Sandra smiled and Said," Criss , wake up baby it's 6:30." Criss Opened his Eyes And smiled. Sandra Said," hey." Criss said Groggily," hey." Sandra Said," ooh, your Voice Sounds Sexy Like that." Criss Said," Thanks." Sandra said," c'mon, You gotta Get Up." Criss moaned And Said," i wanna Stay in bed All Day ." Sandra said," You Have To get Up For The Meeting." Criss said," ok, i'm Up." Now, He Slowly Got Up, Stretched and went To The Bathroom. Sandra was still in Bed, But she was Gonna Surprise Him In the Shower. Criss Started The Shower, And he Took Off What He Had On. Now Sandra Slowly Came in And Said," may i Join You ?" Criss Said ," sure." Now, Sandra Took Off What She had On, And Criss Smiled.

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Chapter 13:


Sandra Climbed into the shower And said," hello Christopher, may i join you ? " Criss Smiled And said, " yes you may. " Sandra Had Her Hair in a Bun, and She Let it Down. Criss was amazed by her body. he loved to see her perfect frame. even though she was pregnant,he thought she looked beautiful. Sandra said," what are you looking at Criss ?" Criss said," oh, Just How Beautiful you are." Sandra said, " no, i look horrible, i'm getting fat." Criss Smiled and said ," you are beautiful, and you're glowing." Sandra said," aww , Thanks Baby." Criss said," your welcome. then, they kissed. Sandra put her Hand On Her growing Belly And smiled.

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Chapter 14:

Now, Criss And Sandra Were Out Of the Shower And Drying Off. Sandra Asked ,"Criss, will i be ok During This Pregnancy ?" Criss Said," Sandra, You'll be Fine, Don't Worry." Sandra Said," I'm just Worried That, I'll Do Something Wrong." Criss Said," you'll Be Fine, i'm here to Help You." Sandra Smiled And Said," Thank you Baby." Criss Said," i Can't Believe It's Been 4 weeks Since we Found Out That, We're Having This Baby." Sandra Said, ' i know, it's been Crazy, But Wonderful." Criss said," yeah, so far you are doing good. " Sandra Said," yeah, Hardly Any Morning Sickness ." Criss said," just wait until a few months later." Sandra Said ," Don't remind me now."

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Chapter 15:


3 months passed, and it was December. Sandra Was getting a Little Bigger Now. Criss Couldn't Wait To tell Everyone About the baby. Sandra Was Feeling good, But still Getting sick. Sandra was Going To the Doctor, And everything was Fine So Far. Criss Said," Sandra, C'mon Baby, it's Time For The Doctor's Appointment." Sandra said," i'm coming ." Now, She had a Maternity Shirt on, And Comfortable Shoes. Criss Said," are you ok?" Sandra Said," yeah, I'm Fine, just Hungry." Criss Saw the bag of nachos And Said," yeah, i Can Tell." Sandra Said," what ? just Because i'm Pregnant, Doesn't mean i Can't Eat For two." Criss Said," Well, it Looks Like maybe 3 ." Sandra Said," you think it's twins ?"

Criss Said," You Have Been Eating Alot More And getting Sicker Than Usual." Sandra Said," we Have to See Criss , You Never Know."

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Chapter 16:


Criss was in his Office And It was 2:00 . then, He Heard A Voice Say, " Criss, Babe where are you ?" Criss Said," i'm in here ." Sandra Said," hey, how was your day ?" Criss Said," It was good, And How Was the Doctor's Appointment ?" Sandra Said," it was Good, Everything Is Fine." Criss Said," Oh, That's Good." Sandra said," yeah But, i Have Something To show You..." Criss Said," Oh Yeah, what ? " Sandra Took Out The Ultra Sound Pictures And Said, " here is the Baby's arms, And Legs.." Criss Said," oh Wow, Look At That." Sandra Said," yeah." Then, She Said," Now, Here is Another Set Of Fingers And Toes..." Criss Looked At Sandra And Said," you Said Another Set Of Fingers and toes. " Sandra said, " we're Having Twins Criss." Criss Looked At Sandra And Said," oh My God, Are You Serious ?" Sandra Said," yeah, i'm Serious." Criss said," wow, we're Having twins." Sandra said," we have To Tell My Family." Criss said," yeah, On Christmas Eve."

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Chapter 17:


Criss And Sandra Were still in Shock Fromn The News About the Twins. But, Criss Said," we have to tell my family." Sandra said," we were gonna wait until Christmas eve I Thought." Criss Said," Yeah but I wanna Tell Them Now." sandra said," oh, ok ." Now, Criss dialed Dimitra's Phone Number And Heard The phone Ring. Then she Answered It And said," Hello ?" Criss Said," hi Mom, how are you ?" Dimitra said," i'm Fine, And You ?" Criss Said," i'm Good. Listen Mom, i Have Some Great News..." Dimitra Said," what, What is It Christopher ?" Criss said," Sandra And I Are Having A Baby." Dimitra Said," oh Christopher, That's Great News." Criss Said," Wait Mom, It gets Better..." Dimitra Said," what?" Criss Said," Sandra and i are Having Twins." Dimitra said ," oh Christopher, what Great News." Criss said," yeah, it Is."

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I guess Criss was right

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yeah, he was.

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I'm not doing this anymore!!!

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i need help!!! :(

[Veritas]

Go back and reread what you had written. That always helps with writer's block.

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ok thanks

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Chapter 18:



Criss was in The Bedroom, And Was listening To His Music. Then, Sandra Came In And Said," Criss, i Want you to Listen To Something..." Criss Said," what, What Is It ? " Sandra said," it's Something From The Doctor's Office." Criss Said," oh, ok." Now, Sandra Took Out The CD that Criss was Listening To, And Put In The CD That She Had From The Doctor's office. Now, She Pushed " Play," and Criss Asked," what are we Listening To ?" Sandra Said," you'll see." then, they Started To Hear The Babies' HeartBeats And Criss Smiled.

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

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i know, right ?

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Forget it, i'm Done!!! :(

[RACHEL02189]

Come on we got to know what they have boy, girl, both. Will Criss be there or will he miss it

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ok, i'll try it again

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Chapter 19:

a Year Passed And Sandra Is 5 Months Pregnant. Criss Was in His Office And Sandra Just Came In , And Said," Criss, Where Are You Babe ?" Criss Said," I'm In Here." Sandra Said, " Come out, I have Something To Show You." Criss Got Off His Computer And Got Up From the Desk. Sandra saw Criss And Said," let's Sit In The Family Room, And i'll Show You." Criss Said," ok." Sandra Said," well, This Is Going To Surprise You, so Be Ready." Criss Said,"ok." Now, Sandra Took Out The SonoGram Pictures From The Envelope, And Handed Them To Criss. Criss Said," wow, Look At Them, So Beautiful." Sandra Said," yeah, just Look Closer Criss." Now, Couldn't Believe What He Saw. He Said, " We're Having Boys ?" Sandra Smiled And Said," Yes , We're Having Boys." Criss Said, Oh My God, i Can't Believe It." Sandra Said," i Know." Then, Criss Rubbed On Sandra's Stomach, And Kissed it. He Said," Hello My Boys."

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Chapter 20:


Sandra Said," now, They're Both Kicking." Criss put His Hand on Her Stomach , And Said," oh Yeah, they Are." Sandra said," It feels Weird, But It's A Good Feeling." Criss Said," i'm Sure It Is." Criss Looked At His Watch And Said," oh, I Have To go to The Studio, Are You going To Be ok ? " Sandra Said," Yeah, i'll Be Fine, Just Go Criss." Criss Grabbed His Keys, And Walked Out The Door. Sandra Followed Him. she Said," bye, i Love You." Criss Said," i Love You More." Then, they Kissed.

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i give up!!!! :(

[RACHEL02189]

Come on you can do it girl :) :) :)

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:) ok, if you say so.

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Chapter 21:


Sandra was outside sitting on the Hammock. Then, She Felt the One Baby Kick And Rubbed Her Stomach. She said," Pretty Soon. " Then, The Other Baby Began To Kick. She Said," oh, you're up too, huh ?" Now, She Said," i'll See you Two Soon." Meanwhile, Criss was in The Studio, And He was in a Meeting For The Next " Loyal Chat Saturday." then, He got a Text From Sandra. It Said," Saga - Po " Christopher" Criss Smiled And Texted Back," Saga - po " Sandra." Sandra Saw the Text, And Smiled. ( Saga -po Means " I love You " in Greek)

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yea :)

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i just figured it out last Night

[RACHEL02189]

Thumbs up :)

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thanks :)

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Chapter 22:


Criss Was Back From The Meeting And he was Home With Sandra. She Was Looking At a Book With Baby Names. Criss Said," How About " Matthew?" Sandra Said, No, THat Name is Too Plain."Then She Said," i Like Alexander." Criss Said," yeah, That Sounds Good." Sandra said," Alexander John." Criss smiled And Said," that Sounds Even Better." Sandra said," And Nicholas James." Criss Said," i like That Too." Sandra felt The one Baby kick And Said," Alexander Likes His name." Criss Put His Hand On Her Stomach And Said," Hello Alexander, It's Daddy." Then, The Baby Moved Again. Criss Said," you Can't Stay Still, Huh ?" Then, He Kissed Her Stomach.

[RACHEL02189]

Can't wait to read more

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Chapter 23:


Criss Called Costa, And He was Over At The house. he Said," So Sandra, how Have You Been Feeling ?" Sandra Said," ok, Just Getting More Tired." Costa Said," Well, Carrying Two Babies Can Do That to You." Sandra Smiled And Said," Yeah But, once i see Them, it'll be Worth It." Now, She Rubbed Her Stomach, And the one Baby Kicked. Costa Said," i saw That." Sandra said," yeah, Criss Can Too Sometimes." Criss Came In And Said," Sandra, where Is Hammie, have You Seen Him ?" Sandra Said," He's outside On One Of The Chairs, Asleep." Costa Asked," will " Hammie Be ok With The New Babies After They are Born ?" Criss said," i'm Sure That he'll Be Fine." Sandra Agreed With Criss," he'll Be Ok."

[Veritas]

There are ways to acclimate a pet when a new baby arrives. You can check it out on Google.

[RACHEL02189]

With all the stories we've done over the years with giving Criss kids do you notice we've never had a Chris JR

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you're right :)

[Veritas]

With all the stories we've done over the years with giving Criss kids do you notice we've never had a Chris JR

Patience, dearie. Maybe Sandra can persuade our Houdini with the little weenie to start a family ;)

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lol funny Veritas

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Chapter 24:

Criss saw the one Wedding Dress that Sandra Picked Out And Said," this one is Beautiful." Sandra Smiled And Said," yeah, i like It Too." Criss Said," i Can't wait For You To Be My Wife." Sandra said, " And i Can't Wait For You To Be my Husband." Just Then, Costa Said," let Me Take A Picture of You two." Criss said," " Cos", Are you Sure That You Can Do it ?" Costa said," yeah, let's Go Outside And Do it." Criss Said," Ok." So Now, Sandra Criss And costa Went outside To The Backyard, And Costa took Over. He Said," ok, let's Go By the Pool, And Criss , You Stand Here, Sandra Next To Him, And you Two Face Each Other." Criss Said," this Looks Great." Sandra said," yeah, it's Perfect." Then, Costa took The picture And said," that's a Great One." Criss Said," Ok, let's Go By the Hammock." Costa Said," good Idea." So They Walked By The Hammock And Costa said," Criss you go on The Hammock First, And Sandra you Next." Now, They Were both on The Hammock, And Costa Took a Picture Of Criss And Sandra Lying Next To Each Other , And It was a nice Picture.

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Chapter 25:


Now Costa Said, " Criss Put Your Hand On Sandra's Stomach, And leave It There." Criss Put His Hand On Sandra's Stomach, And He Felt one Of The Babies' Kick. He Said," Sandra, one Of The Boys Just Kicked." Sandra Smiled And Said," which One ?" Criss Said," it Might Have Been Nicholas Or Alexander." Sandra said," usually, Alexander is The One That Is Moving Around." Criss Said," OK, so it's Alexander." Sandra Said," Nicholas Only Moves If There Is Music Playing." Criss said," he Likes latin Music." Sandra said," yeah, He's Like Me." Costa said," ok, Good Pictures you Two." Sandra said," Criss Help Me up." now, Criss Helped Sandra Off Of the Hammock, And They Went Inside. " Hammie " Followed Them In Too. Criss Saw the Cat And asked," are you Hungry, Huh " Hammie ?" the Cat Meowed And Criss Said," ok " Hammie" , Let's Get Your Dinner Ready." Now, he Grabbed Hammie's Food Dish And put it on The Counter. Sandra said," i'm gonna Be In The Family Room, Away From the Smell." Costa said," i Forgot That Sandra Doesn't Like The Cat Food Smell When She's Pregnant." Criss Said," yeah, it makes Her Nauseous."

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My cousin couldn't stand her husband's aftershave when she was pregnant

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oh yeah, that happens to pregnant Women :)

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Chapter 26:


2 Months Passed And Sandra was Now 7 Months Pregnant. She Had 2 More Months to Go. Criss Still Worked At " Believe", And Sandra Worked Too. But She Was leaving Soon. Sandra can't wait to see the Babies. Either Can Criss. Criss was excited, So Was his Family. Costa did Come By To See Criss And Sandra. Criss Said," so " Cos", How Are things at work ? " Costa Said," things are good, Just Alot Of Paper Work." Sandra Said," yeah, I bet." Criss Asked," Sandra, are you Sure You'll Be ok For The Show Tonight ?" Sandra Said," yeah, I'll Be fine, Don't Worry Baby." Costa looked At His Watch And Said," ok, i Gotta Go now. bye Criss , bye Sandra." Criss Said," let Me Walk You Out, Ok ?" Costa Said," sure, Ok." Now, Costa Said," I'll Call You Later Before You Leave For The Show, ok ?" Criss Said," Yeah, Ok." Now, The Door Closed. Sandra felt one Of The Twins Kick And Said," one Of The Babies Are up." Criss Said," oh, Which One ?" Sandra Said," i Think It's Nicholas." Criss Rubbed his Hand On Her Belly And Said," hello Nicholas, It's Daddy."

[RACHEL02189]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) :)

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yeah, cute, huh ?

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Someone Help Me!!!! :(

[Veritas]

Take a deep breath and reread what you wrote. That always helps.

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good idea thanks

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Chapter 27:


Sandra Yelled," Criss!" Criss Ran in The room And Said," what Sandra ?" she said," Can You Get That For Me, It's too High." Criss said," sure." Now, He reached up, And Grabbed What Sandra Wanted. Sandra Said," thank you Criss." Then, They Kissed. Sandra Said," now, i'll go rest." Criss asked," yeah, go rest, you need to be off your feet." Sandra Said," thanks. " Sandra was Feeling Uncomfortable, And Her Feet were Swollen. Criss was Really Taking Care Of Her.

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Chapter 28:


Criss was on His way Home When He Heard The phone Ring . he Answered It And Said, " Hello ?" Sandra's Brother said," Criss, You Have To Go To The Hospital, Sandra's in Labor."

Criss Was Shocked And He Said," She's 2 Months Early, What Happened ?" Sandra's Brother Said," well, She was At the House, And She was Feeling Some Pain. Then, it happened, Her Water Broke." Criss Said," Ok, i'll Be Right Over. " Now, he Hung Up the Phone, And Told Tommy, " Go Straight To Henderson Medical Center, hurry up." Tommy Said,
" ok Criss, whatever You Say." Now Criss was Worrying About Sandra And The Babies.

[RACHEL02189]

Oh no

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Chapter 29:


Criss Arrived at The Hospital, And It was 11:35 Pm He Walked up to The Desk And The Nurse Said," may I help you Sir ?" Criss Said," yeah, i'm Here Because My Fiancee went into Labor Early." The Nurse Asked, " What Is Her Name ?" Criss Said," Sandra Gonzalez." The Nurse Said," oh Yes, She's In The " Labor And Delivery Suite. Your Name Sir ?" Criss Said," Christopher Sarantakos." The Nurse Said, " Ok Mr. Sarantakos, i'll Show You Where She Is." Criss Said," thank You very Much." then He Said," tommy , call Costa, And tell Him That I'm At The Hospital." Tommy Said," ok I Will Criss, Don't Worry." Now, criss Followed The Nurse to where Sandra was.

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Chapter 30:


Now They walked to the room where Sandra was in And He Said," hi Baby, What Happened ?" Sandra Said," well, i was at My Parent's House, And I was Fine. then, i Went Into The Bathroom, And i felt Some Pain..." Criss Said," and Then , Your water Broke." Sandra said," yeah, i Don't know Why It's Happening Now, i'm Scared Criss." Criss Said," It's Ok Sandra, Everything Is Gonna Be ok." Sandra Smiled And Said, " thanks Babe." Then, The Monitor Started To Beep, And Criss Said," what, What Is That ?" Sandra Said," the Doctor Put Me on Some Monitors, And The Babies Too." Criss Said," and You're Having a Contraction?" Sandra Said," Yes, Ouch! " Now, Criss Held Sandra's Hand And Said," you're Doing Ok Babe, just Breathe." a Few Minutes Later, The Contractions Stopped. Sandra Said," the Doctor Told Me ,there May Be A Chance That, i Might Have To Have a C - Section." Criss Said," why, i Thought That The Babies Were ok." Sandra said," Well, one Of The Babies are Breech."

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Help, I'm Running out of Ideas!!

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Forget It, i Give up!!!!! :(

[RACHEL02189]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO don't leave us like that. We have to know if the babies are going to be all right :eek:

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yeah, you're Right.

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that's it, i'm so done!!!!

[RACHEL02189]

COME ON I hate clif hangers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Chapter 31:


It was a long Night for Criss And Sandra. But now, It was Time For The Babies To Arrive. Sandra was in The Operating Room, And Criss was Too. It was Now, 5: 34 Am, And Sandra was Given Something To Relax. There was a Sheet Covering Where The Doctors Were Making The Incision. Criss Held Sandra'she was Scared. But, Seeing The Boys Will Be Worth It. It Took While , But Finally, At 6: 25 Am, Nicholas James Arrived. Then, At 6: 27 Am, Alexander John arrived. Criss saw Them, And Said," They're Beautiful Babe." Sandra Couldn't Help But Cry. They were Being Checked Out By The Nurses, And Being Weighed. Nicholas Weighed 5lbs. 7 oz. And Alexander Weighed 5lbs. 4 oz. He was a Little Smaller Than Nicholas. Then, they were Rushed To the Nicu. And Sandra knew That , it had To Be Done.

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Chapter 32:


Now, Sandra was in Her Room, resting. She Was ok, Just A Little Sore. Criss Let Her Rest, And he was in the waiting Room Telling Everyone About The Babies. Dimitra asked," how long Will The Babies Be In The Nicu ?" Criss Said, " They'll Be In There Until they Are well Enough To go Home." JD Asked," How's Sandra Doing ?" Criss Said," She's Doing Ok . She Just feels A Little Down Because Of The Babies being in The Nicu, and not Being Able To See Them." Lynn Said," Poor Sandra, she'll Be Able To see Them Soon, i Hope." Costa Said," She's Just Going Through some Post - Partum Depression." JD Looked At Costa And Asked," how Do You Know About That ?" Costa Said," i Read It In The Book that They Have." JD Said," i Remember That. Lynn Went Through that After" Dimi" was Born. But, She Got Better." Criss Said," So, Sandra Will get Better Though, Right ? " JD Assured His Brother," yeah, She'll Be Fine."

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Chapter 33:

Criss was Allowed To Go See the Babies. But, He had To Wear Gloves, And Something Else Over his Clothes. Sandra didn't Want To See the Babies, Because She'll Feel even More Guilty About Not Being Able To hold Them. The Nurse Said, " ok Mr. Sarantakos, You Can Put your Hands THrough This Hole Here, And Feel The Baby's Hands." Criss Said," Oh, I See." The Nurse Said," if you Want , you Can Touch Him Too." Criss Said," I know That." Now, He Touched Nicholas And Said," hi Nicholas, it's Daddy." Nicholas moved His Head , And looked At Criss. Criss Smiled And Said," Yeah, It's Me." He Continued By Saying, " You're So Strong, And Brave, Just Like me." And I Know That , Mommy Would Love To See you And Your Brother Soon."

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Chapter 34:

Criss saw Alexander And said," hello Alexander, It's Daddy." Alexander Looked At Criss And he had his hand in Criss's. Criss Teared up, and Said," i love you so Much." Now, He Heard a Voice Say," Look Who's Here To see The Babies. " Criss Wiped his Eyes And Turned Around.

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Chapter 35:


Criss Saw Sandra And Said,hi babe." Sandra Said," hi." Criss said," isn't he Beautiful ?" Sandra Said," Yes he is, Just Like Me." Criss Said," and me too." Sandra Laughed and Said," of Course You Too." The Doctor Said," So Far Nicholas Is Doing Well, And His Breathing Is Improving." Criss Asked, " how About Alexander ?" The Doctore Said," well Alexander Is Behind Nicholas, And his Heart Beat Is Much Better than It was." Sandra Sighed And said," thank god." Criss Assured Sandra and Said," See Babe, The Boys Are gonna Be Ok, they Just Need To Be Here for A While Longer." Sandra Said," and I'm Leaving Soon." The Doctor Said," Don't Worry, they'll be home when they're Well Enough."

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Let's see how is Criss handling this

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Chapter 36:


on The way home, Criss Was In The Car, And He Couldn't Stop Thinking About Sandra And The Twins. He thought ," what If The Boys Didn't Make It . How Would Sandra react? And me too." Then, His Eyes Began to Well Up With Tears And He was Upset. But, He Knew that, He Had To Be Strong For Sandra, And Pray That, those Twins Will make It . then, he Thought of When His Father Passed On, and how he was During That Time. But, It Wasn't Gonna Happen To The Boys.

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Chapter 37:


3 Days Later, Sandra was Getting Ready To leave The Hospital, And Her Mom Was there Too.

At First, It was Hard, But Sandra Knew That, she Had To Leave, And Come Back For The twins When They Got better. Sandra's Mom Said," sandra, Aren't You gonna See the Boys Before You Leave ?" Sandra Smiled And Said," Yeah Mom, Why ?" Sandra's Mom Said," i Thought That, You Would Be Too upset To leave Them Here." Sandra Said, " They'll Be Ok Here, they Just Need To get Better That's All." Sandra 's Mom Said," oh, i See." Sandra 's Cell Phone Rang And She Answered it," Hello ?" Criss Said," Hi Sandra." Sandra Smiled And said," hey Criss, How Are You ?" Criss Said," i'm Good. So, Are You Almost Ready ?" Sandra Said," yeah, I just Need To Pack Up more Stuff, And My Mom helped Me with Other Stuff Too." Criss Said," Oh , that's Good." Sandra said," Criss, why Are You so Quiet ?" Criss Asked," why Did you Ask That ?" Sandra said," well, you Got Quiet After That, What's Wrong ?" Criss Said," well, i Feel Kind Of Weird Leaving the Boys Here, And us Going Back To the House." Sandra said," my Mom said The Same Thing. You And I Know That, The Twins Will Be Here until they Get Better, it's the best Thing For Them." Criss Said," You're Right."

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with a happy ending :)

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Forget It, this is Hard!!!! :(

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Chapter 38:


3 Months Later:

Criss And Sandra Were at thein thew house and they were taking care the twins. Criss Said," Sandra, Where are you ?" Sandra said," I'm in the bedroom with Nicholas." Criss Said," oh, ok. i'll be outside with Alexander." Sandra Said," don't Be Outside too Long, it's very Hot. " Criss Said," ok, I won't." Now, He Was Sitting outside With Alexander, And He just Stared At Him. Alexander was Doing Much Better now, his Heart was Doing Good Too. Criss Said," you Look Like me Alexander, yes you do." now, Alexander Made a Little Noise, and Criss Said," was that a laugh, huh ? " Now Sandra Was watching from inside the house, and Nicholas was in The Pack 'N Play. She Had The Camera And Took a Picture of Criss And Alexander.

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